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* So I got 4 entries this time * happy dance * and the entries were so good it was really hard to choose 1, 2nd and 3rd and 4th. If I could make everyone first I would but I cant, rules are rules. Here are the results :P *

In 4th place is..

call_me_epic, Very nice! I loved how she was in a dilemma after trying hard to save him. I loved the twist at the end when she sacrificed herself, refucing to kill him! I enjoyed reading your entry a lot and I hope to read more of your entries in the future.

In 3rd place is..

This was extremely hard to choose for the next three but in 3rd is..

maram4ever! I loved your story! The past built up and then she went in in! It was very intriguing and left me happy that she had solved the past. It was very well thought out but maybe use a bit more original idea? But other than that A-MAZE-ING. I am very happy you entered! Please enter in the future!

In 2nd place is..

kms162002! I loved the way itbuilt up emotionally showing her past and how she had loved her father. Once again, first and second was hard to decide, your piece left me amazed out how something so short could make you feel so sad. It was very well constructed and beautifully sad! Well done, I hope you enter in the future!

Finally in 1st place is..

thelilstrudel! AMAZING. Your writing is very well constructed and engaging. I loved the way the character was continuosly debating weather her sights were due to her being drunk or dreaming etc. The characters conversations felt real and what he kept saying made me curious. Over all WELL DONE. Please enter in the future :P



* Well done to all of you! Please PM regarding your rewards! The originality you guys have come up with is great :P Remember you all get rewards because you came 1st, 2nd, 3rd and 4th! Stay tuned for the next competition which I will update in a moment. :P *

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