Short Stories

Connections Rewrite

Warning long authors note!! Skip to REWRITTEN VERSION.

Hello! I wanted to give you a guys an idea of how I want my writing to evolve. Of course me being me I wanted to rewrite a sex scene to demonstrate. I've been dabbling back into my Wattpad reading bag. (I'll take any recommendations by the way.) I've been reading some super amazing books and I got inspired to rewrite this scene in particular. This early on in David's and Romani's relationship (lowkey might change names in re-writes) and it's one of my favorite sex scenes I've written but I knew it needed some work. I hope you like it. Also don't read both if you don't want to, just skip down to REWRITTEN VERSION.

OLD VERSION

I knocked on Romani's door waiting for his silly ass to answer. One of his neighbors saw me and thought it would be a good idea to talk to me.

"Hey I've seen you here before." He said to get my attention. I turned around and saw some white guy. He was tall but looked skinny and his skin was pale.

"Yeah," I nodded, turning back around and knocking on the door again.

"You live in one of the apartments?" He asked. I turned back around with a glare.

"No."

"That's too bad." He smirked. I clenched my fist. This nigga is flirting with me and I don't like it. I don't think I'm attracted to him.

Before I could say anything else the door opened. As soon as the door opened Romani stood behind me and wrapped me in his arms.

"He's mine Tyler. Get the fuck on." The guy blushed before hurrying away. I watched until he was down the hall to turn towards Romani. I gave him a quick kiss.

"His ass stay flirting with any nigga he see." Romani glared.

"Don't be claiming me. I ain't yo nigga." I said, wrapping my arms around him. He smirked at me.

"I be fucking you like you're my nigga." He smiled, dragging me inside.

I glared at him. I couldn't hold it long because I remembered when I finally let him fuck me. It wasn't long after I topped him. He said it was unfair that he was in pain and I wasn't. I was ready to bottom the moment he did. He really made me realize I needed to put my pride aside.

A week after I fucked him I let him top me. It was intense but I liked it. We've been switching ever since. It feels good and Mani knows what he is doing. It's a plus he likes to be fucked so I'm not taking it all the time.

"Whatever, what did you cook tonight?" I peeked over his shoulder. I didn't see anything so I looked back at him. "Where's the food?" I pouted.

"I've never seen you pout." He smiled. "It's cute." He kissed me before letting go. I followed him into the kitchen. He had set out a bunch of raw food.

"I always cook for you, now I want you to cook for me." He smiled. I looked at him confused.

"Romani I can't cook."

"You a grown ass man who can't fucking cook." He asked.

"Watch yo mouth and no I can't cook." I glared.

"Don't tell me to watch my mouth like I'm a little ass kid." He snapped. We were standing next to each other. I was so close I could choke him and I might.

"You act like a fucking child." I said turning away from him.

"I'm the child? You're the one who can't cook. Don't you have a daughter? How don't you know how to cook?" He said following me.