Uncle Orochimaru?

Not a chapter!

Hello! Curly here!

This is not a chapter, but a few short explanations about the story which might confuse some people.

For example:

Geishas? What in the hell are they doing in Naruto?!

I placed geishas in the naruto story since it's something of the Japanese history.

The only difference is that the geishas in Naruto are more skilled and clever who entertain the men with using gen Jutsu.

They are able to defend themselves with some basic taijutsu ( not professional taijutsu like a chunin of course, but enough to defend themselves by a common man).

This is also the reason why Hitomimaru is capable of using gen Jutsu and has a small knowledge about shinobi.

Of course, she is missing a lot of information, but it's better than nothing.

How does the whole thing with her and Orochimaru being family work?

Maybe some of you know that there has been a time in china and other Asian countries that you were only allowed to have one child. People preferred to have a male child over a female.

Of course it's not that case in the Naruto story, but I've seen some signs in the Naruto series that the males seem as stronger than females ( not always, but if you go into detail... you might notice it).

So I thought: "what if there was a child born before Orochimaru? A child born as a female and the parents didn't want to have a female child?

We do not know how the parents are of Orochimaru since there isn't enough information about him only that they died during the third war.

So, of course, the would put the female child for adoption. The girl gets adopted, goes her own way in another village, gets a friend, a love life, a child ( Hitomimaru ) and so on and so on.

Get it? Okay, next one

Is Hitomimaru a mary sue?

In the beginning ( when I started to write this story a while ago) she had traits of a mary-sue. But now? No definitely not. I'm going to explain to you why.

In the second chapter, she is described as something beautiful ( my earlier work) but now I believe that was because of the geisha make-up and it was actually not her whole appearance that Kabuto found beautiful, it was her expression that she showed to him.

And beauty is subjective....

The MC has a lot of flaws that you are going to notice in the next chapters.For example:

Hitomimaru has really thin eyebrows which she doesn't like and she tries to make them appear to be fuller with make-up.

She also has a too white skin that is really sensitive to sunlight.

The MC is also unhealthy underweight, since she didn't get enough nutrition and vitamins in the Okiya, and being unhealthy underweight isn't something that should be considered as something beautiful.

Hitomimaru has really thin lips, girls these days prefer full beautiful lips which she also tries to make fuller with make-up.

She's really short and has a baby face and really big eyes. Big eyes may be considered as something beautiful, but it also makes her appear to be a younger age.

And I'll guarantee you that these flaws are going to be obstacles in the future.

She doesn't fit the mary sue character at all in appearance ( in my opinion).

It's true that it appears as something Mary-sue when someone's parents die, but at least she had lived a normal life the first years of her years and she had parents who really loved her with all their heart.

And it's more common in the naruto time that your parents have a higher risk to die when they're shinobi's or are in high debts.

And of course, the Okiya was horrible most of the time, but at least she had a roof under her head and she could do something useful with the skills they taught her.

And she has a relative though it's Orochimaru.

And to continue about her personality. She's really too sly for her own good, she might get easily out of messes but is also great at challenging people at the wrong time. Though she's really clever in her own way?

I'll guarantee you, not everybody is going to like her and that this won't be a reverse-harem story about Orochimaru's cousin who gets all the boys. Eh, just no.

I don't like those stories at all. It's too cliche.

And another thing: the main character and Sasuke won't be together!!!!

Like no!

There are just not made for each other and there will never be any love between them.

Maybe later on they will have a closer bond than in the beginning, but not a romantic bond for sure.

I don't want to add another love story about Sasuke and an OC! Sasuke is too busy with revenge!

And it's not always about romance!

~CurlyClone