Swirling Darkness

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Adam-

My head throbs and I can only see black and blue swirls. Round and round they spin. I peel my eyes open to a dim lit tunnel, my clothes are stained with mud, dirt and... Blood? I raise a hand to my face and gasp in pain. My hand is covered in blood and my face is bruised and swollen. I pull my self up and stagger forward when I here a voice, Someone talking fast and quietly. Gasping I pull myself towards the sound, trying to block out the stabbing pain that comes with each movement, until I finally see a boy kneeling in front of a camera. Relief floods me until the screaming begins, and then the boy joins in, the two sources screaming for help. I step forward, aiming to help, but I trip and fall before I even utter a single syllable. The boy runs and the camera falls the lens staring blankly at me the red recording bleeping steadily. This is a live recording. I reach out to grab it when a thick leather boot smashes the camera with its heel... "Now what do we have here?"


Hi, would like anyones opinions for the upcoming story 


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