Raveena , Good End Evil

Hy guys!! I decided to write a story but I am not yet sure what will it turn into. This story was inspired by the latest movie Snowhite and the huntsman, but it has its own plot and the caracters are diferent. I am really bad at grammer and writing so I hope you can forgive me! :) Thanks for reading, hope you like ti :) Oh and please leave me a comment so I could know what to change, or to do, to make the story better. Thanks :) XOXO

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Once upon a time in a faraway kingdom lived a girl with skin as pale as snow, hair as black as night and lips as red as blood. She was called Raveena and she was the ear to the trone.

Her mother died while giving birth to her, but before leaving her only child to the misery of the world she cased a spell upon her. She was to be the pritties, forever young and emortal queen, but the spell also had a bad side : to remain beautifle she had to suck the youth from other women and the little girl was also given The Mirror with runa marks ingraved around it. The inscription said: Mirror, mirror on the wall who' s the farest of them all. Those ingravings were the secret lock to the mirror and when they were spoken in front of it, it rose to life, begun to talk and advice the young princess.

And so without knowing of the spell young Raveena lived in the most beautifle castle on the world surrounded with milions of servants whom made her every wish come true. When she turned 18 she first discovered her curse.

She was alone in her library looking in the mirror and listening to the sea when she first read the mirror's ingraveings: " Mirror, mirror on the wall who's the fairest of them all?? " and with that the golden mirror started to melt down and it formed a shape of a cloked figure. Raveena was shocked and bewildered when the figure spoke :

"Raveena" it said " I bow to you my masteres, queen and lady. " and so the golden figure bowed. " Who are you? Where have you comed from? How do you know me? " the questions just come out like a waterfalt out of Raveena and the figure rose from the ground " I am The Mirror and I am here to serve and adwice you Your Highnes. "

"But how do you know my name?" Raveena repeted.

" Your queen mother told me when she last asked for my presents. " Raveenas wide eyes filled with questions made The Mirror to continue with explanations "It was many, many years ago that young queen Myra first saw me, your mothers mother. It was in this very room, I remenber. She, like yourself, loved to read but she had taken a wrong book once and it tought her dark magic that imprinted on her blood and made her the first witch in your family, and is now carried from generation to generation. The same you now have in your blood my queen.

I was always in this room but Myra grow old, she didn't have the power to keep herself young as your mother and yourself have , do to the fact that this power increses itself trugh the years. One day Myra grow mad with me for telling her the truth, I can not lie as you see, she no longer was the prettiest woman in the world. I could not be destroyed and so the old queen coverd me with dark and thic fabric so no one would finde me. Until your mother discoverd me I was fourgotton and not needed."

"She told me all of what you are and what will you become when you reach 18 years of life." "W-what am I then Mirror?" The Mirror bowed once again and told her all about the curs her mother had cast upon her.

"Emortal and forever beautifle? " Raveena always trusted her instints, when they led her to trouble her beauty led her out, she always felt it was a different tipe of beauty, the one that makes women enveous and men lustful. It was a tipe of beauty that concored armies, the beauty that killed. She knew she had to trust the Mirror, knew it was telling the truth and besides her instint told her it was right. "Tell me more. More about the magic. Can I use it?" When she first found out that it egsisted in stories she emediatly wanted it to be true, wanted to use ti, now she might get the chance she longed for.

"The magic your mother found in that book brought her to me. The book is now lost but the magic remains. Your curse-" "It isn't a curs, it is a bless!" Raveena interupted "As Your Highnes whishes. The bless you have was made by that same magic and yes, you can use it. All that you desire can be yours. The magic floats whitin you and you need no book to teach you how to use it. It can turn you into any animal close to you and your hart give you the power to create or destroy life, mantayn or heal flesh, destroy cityes and rebuild them... You will be the ruener of kingdoms.Your beauty will be great any your power enormus." "When?" Raveenas green eyes glowed with lust for that power " Soon my lady, soon."