Friday Night Stars: Come in my Room?

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“I have to tell you something” he looks at me surprised.

“What is it?”

“Well I can’t put it into words so I’ll just do this.” I moved forward to him and kissed him. I rapped my arms around him and he put his hand through my hair. I felt alive. His kisses make me feel like I haven’t truly lived until now. I want to be with you Eliet. Forever.

We moved to the street wall while kissing. Suddenly we heard “Eliet!” We stopped kissing and looked at who screamed. “Kim!” we both said shocked that she was in front of us.

“You filthy cheater!” Kim slapped Eliet. Eliet didn’t get angry. Eliet probably thought he deserved that.

“And this garbage!” She was about to slap me but Eliet grabbed her hand quickly. Eliet knows how to fight because he use to take defense lessons when he was younger.

“You can hit me all you want but don’t touch her.” Eliet let go of Kim’s hand and she walked off while stomping her boots on the ground. You could hear her shoes from a mile away. I turn back at Eliet and I just start to laugh out of the blue.

“Why are you laughing?”

“Because that was so awkward, ha ha ha!” Eliets starts to laugh too.

“So what’s going to happen now” I nervously looked at him with an innocent face. He holds my hand and we start walking. He smiles and says “Well now I get to hold your hand, and I give you a kiss…” He walks backwards in front of me and kisses my cheek. I blush while my mind is going crazy. We stop and he leans forward.

“…So Star what is that called?”

“A couple?”

He patted my head and remarked “Yes…Good girl” “Shut up!” I laughed. This was the day I’ve always hoped for and now that it finally came I don’t think anything can match this day. I remember how Eliet use to be all shy when we were little and blush every time I was close to him and now he is so confident and sweet.

 I smiled and Eliet asked; “What are you thinking about?”

“I’m just remembering how shy you were when you were small.”

“I wasn’t shy!”

I laughed. “Yes you were. You used to blush every time I hugged you. Remember that day when we went to the park with mom and you somehow rolled off the slide.”

I laughed together “I did not roll off the slide. My sneakers were untied and when I got up I tripped.”

“That’s not how I remembered it” we smile at each other.

“Eliet?”

“Yeah?’

“When we go home can we go to the rooftop and watch the stars together?”

He smiles “We haven’t done that in years. I would love to.” We were both excited.

When we arrived to my house we found Jayme sitting in the steps that led to our rooms. His face was covered by his two hands as he looked down. He looked up with a gloomy stare and I noticed that Eliet and I were still holding hands.

“Oh hi Starla.” Oh Jayme please smile. I don’t want you to be sad. I looked at Eliet to give him a signal to talk to him. Eliet understood.

“Hey Jayme, We’re going star gazing up in the roof. You want to come?” At first it looked like he didn’t want to but then he nodded yes. He stood up and we started to walk up. We passed our rooms and pulled down the ladder that led to the attic. The Attic reminded me of the time me and Eliet would play here as kids. There was a bed in front of a balcony and some old stuff in each side.

This is the 2nd guest room. Eliet grabbed a ladder and opened the small roof door with a key that he grabbed on top of the shelf next to the bed. When Eliet went up he gave me his hand to help me up. We were all in the roof and we all looked up. We were so amazed by how pretty the stars looked. Even Jayme liked it and he didn’t care about it as much as we did.  Our house is at the top of a steep hill so the view is beautiful.

We all laid back staring at the stars. It was so beautiful, the sky and this moment. I want to go up there someday, With Eliet. I looked next to me and smiled at him. The night was fun. We spent a while up there and even Eliet and Jayme were starting to get along. Jayme left first and said he had to go to sleep because he had to leave in the morning. When me and Eliet were alone for those couple of minutes it felt like a dream. Everything was so perfect.

“You want to go?” I asked Eliet. He smiled at me and he slowly came close to me and kissed me softly. His soft hands touched my neck. He stopped and then said “Now we can go” we both smiled and then started to head down stairs. That was the best moment I had all day. Even better than Kim getting humiliated. He walked me to my room and we started to whisper; “Today was the best day ever” I said. “Even better than the time I rolled down the slide?” He jokingly said. We giggled softly. “Come in… I have to give you something back” He looked at me in a confident yet intimidating way. He bit his lip and slowly walked in. He sat in the small window bed as I looked through my bag. I walked to Eliet and said “Here” He looked up and saw the notebook he gave me. “Keep it” I looked at him shocked.

“Really?”

“Yeah I want you to keep it. It’s about you and I want you to remember that even in the darkest moments I care about you.” I blush and he gives me his hand and pushes me close. We kiss slowly and I rap my arm around him.

“I like you so much Eliet” he stops kissing my neck and looks at me.

I grabbed his hand and said; “Can you stay here like you use to? And can we talk all night and stare at each other while we sleep?” we laid in my bed side by side. We both wanted to be together. Not in a sexual way tonight but even more stronger than that, we wanted to be around each other. We wanted to be by each other’s side and never let go.

“You read my mind.” For hours we talked about everything we faced and all our ups and downs and we hugged each other and kissed and eventually feel asleep next to each other.

In the morning mom came in the room and me and Eliet woke up to say goodbye to Jayme. She was surprised to see Eliet in my room. Eliet and I were so tired that I don’t think we remember how we got downstairs. We walked like zombies to the porch and when I saw Jayme with his army uniform I woke up and I hugged him.

I started to cry. “It felt like it was only yesterday that you came back. Jayme I’ll miss you.”

“I’ll miss you more”

“Jayme?”

“Yeah?”

“Thank you!” We separate.

“Thanks man!” Eliet screams and Jayme jokingly salutes. Jayme got into a gray car and left. I was gunna miss Jayme, more than I thought.

Eliet patted my back and we walked inside. We started to head up stairs and Eliet stopped.

“What is it?”

“Will you go on a date tomorrow?” I laughed with joy and said “

 ”Yes!”

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Hey you guys ! So last type i forgot to say that it was the 10th chapter I made and now my 11th (Crowd claps) Well I hope you guys are injoying the story so far but this are going to get crazy.... especially in the next chapter. I'v bin waiting to get to the chapters that are coming up and I'm excited to write it but at the same time i'm not. Like I said theres only going to be 22 chapters so it's going to be weird not write the story after I'm done but any way. I love all you guys who allways read my stuff and thank you so much. I posted chapter 1 and 2 audio reading but I haven't poster anymore yet because I'v bin busy so sorry. Please tell me what you think of the story so far , I would love to hear your thoughts!!

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