Louis' Broken Heart

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Louis' Point of View
"Louis?" My little sister Daisy asked. "Yes Daisy?" I said. "Why are you so glum? Do you want some tea and biscuits? Lottie is making it." I nodded. "Thanks Daisy." She nodded, hugging me. She caught a glimpse of a tear rolling down my cheek. "Louis? Why are you crying?" I was speechless. I nodded and she hugged me again. I wiped my eyes and she went into the kitchen. I got my car keys and left. Why did Eleanor have to fall in love with...him? Was I not good enough? Was I clingy? Who knows? She just said she wasn't happy with me and said, "We're done Louis." Tears went down my face as I parked at Y/N's house. I knocked on her door and she opened it, immediately looking worried. "Can I come in?" I sniffled. "Of course Lou. Come on. I'll get you some tea." She traveled to the kitchen and came out with 2 cups. She gave me one and put the second one on the table. "Come here Louis." I put the cup on the coffee table and hugged her tightly, sobbing. "Eleanor broke up with me and I don't know why! Why did she have to do this????!" Sobs racked my body as I cried on her shoulder. She rubbed my back as I clung to her. She layed me down on the couch and was gentle with me. "Go to sleep Lou. We'll talk when you wake up." She covered me up and darkness hit me like a bag a bricks. Sleep is what I needed.
Your Point of View
I got a call from Johanna. "Thank gosh you picked up. Do you know where Louis is?" She said frantically. "Calm down Mrs. Tomlinson. He's right here. But there's one problem. I guess Eleanor broke up with him for no reason and he's doubting himself. He's sleeping so after he gets up, I told him to talk to me about it." She sighed. "Thank you so much Darling. Take care of him for me." "You're welcome. Bye." I hung up and sighed. Poor Louis. The thing is, I've always had a crush on him and Eleanor hated me for some reason. But she was nice to Perrie and Sophia. I rubbed his stomach and then got up to warm his tea. His hand caught my wrist. "Don't go. Lay with me." He whispered. I layed next to him and rubbed his stomach. "Tell me what's wrong." I gently said. He nodded, his breathing getting rugged. "Shhh.. calm down Lou. Just breathe." He calmed down and started telling me what happened. "Eleanor and I were out to eat when she said she had to go to the bathroom. So I waited for her. She came out with another guy and said, "I've found someone better than you. I'm not happy with you. We're done Louis. I'll be better off without you." So I cried and went to my house. Lukily, Lottie and my sister's were the only ones home. Mum had gone shopping and dad was at work. Daisy has noticed that I was crying and went to get me tea. But I didn't want to let my feelings out on her. I needed you. You're my best friend. I just needed comfort and you...you did." I slightly smiled but it turned to anger. "Why would she do such a thing?" I asked. "I don't know, Y/N. Maybe I was clinging to her, but it was cause I adored her." I nodded. Does he still like her? "C-can.. I stay here tonight?" Louis asked. "Of course. Why don't you get ready for bed. You can sleep in my room. I'm gonna warm up your tea." He nodded and walked up the stairs. My phone rang. "Hello?" "You're gonna regret helping Louis." I stopped in my tracks. "You're not good enough for him. I was but I dated him for his money. Oh it was so much fun playing his heart. I shot it like a bullet. You better not help him. Or you might just get hurt." Eleanor cackled. "I know that's you Eleanor. I'm not falling for this. Just shut your mouth. You hurt him. I will forever hate you." I hung up and cried softly. What if I'm not good enough for him? There was a knock on the door that interrupted my thoughts. I opened it and there was Eleanor. I was about to slam the door when she stopped it. "Oh don't be like that." She punched me in the eye. I cried out in pain. She clamped a hand over my mouth and held a gun to my head. My life would flash right in front of me. I shook like a scared animal. "If you move, I will shoot you. If you don't, I'll let you go and not tell Louis about the crush you have on him. I dated him to make you jealous. He wasn't worth anything." I heard a sniffle. Louis was standing at the doorway to the living room. "How could you? Why would you do that to her? You've changed. I'm happy you broke up with me." He came closer and she smirked. "One more move, she dies." I cried. "Why are you doing this?" Louis asked. "I enjoy hurting people. Don't you see?" I bit her hand and got free. She pulled the trigger and I felt pain. Darkness swelled my eyes.
Louis' Point of View
No. No. No. NO! "Y/N!! Eleanor.. GET THE HECK OUT! My heart and now this? What did I ever do to you?! Huh?!!! That's what I thought!" He pushed her out and slammed the door. I knelt by Y/N and pulled up her shirt. I put my head to her chest. Good... she's still breathing. But for how long? I called 911. "911, what's your emergency?" "My girlfriend has been shot. By my ex. She's bleeding but she's breathing. Please come quick." "Help is on the way." I realized that I called her my girlfriend without knowing it. Although, I've always liked her, and I liked her more when Eleanor was getting distant. No. I didn't cheat. I just found her to talk to because Eleanor never ever ignolleged that I existed and when she did she never gave me affection for long. They arrived and I called her parents while I got in the ambulance. "Hello Louis!" Mrs. Y/L/N said. "I have some bad new about your daughter. She's been shot by my ex. My ex is such a jerk. Don't worry. I'm in the ambulance and she's breathing. Would you two meet us at the hospital?" She gasped. "Of course! Thank you Lou." I smiled slightly. "No problem." I hung up and held her hand. When we got to the hospital, her parents weren't there but the doctors said they had to take her into surgery immediately. I kissed her forehead as tears slipped out if my eyes. I waited in the room that she was supposed to go in after surgery and waited for her parents. This is all my fault. I shouldn't of gone to her house. I hate myself. Ugh! She's going to die because of me! I started to cry. I didn't notice her parents showed up. But I heard a sigh. I looked up at their faces, mine covered in tears. "Oh Louis, are you alright?" I shook my head. "Eleanor, my ex, broke up with me today. Then Y/N helped me not be upset. Eleanor showed up at her house and I went to go to bed when I heard struggling downstairs. She had a gun pointed to Y/N's head." I stopped for an minute, holding in a sob. "She bit Eleanor's hand and got free. But, then I heard the trigger being pulled. I heard a bang and then Y/N was on the floor. I pushed Eleanor out and called 911." Sobs racked my body. "I-I.. Never got to tell her that I had a crush on her." Mrs. Y/L/N sat next to me and rubbed my back, tears traveled down both of their faces. "She always talked about you. She loves you Louis. Just know that and if you want to date her, it's fine with me. It looks as if you truly care about her." Mr. Y/L/N said. "Thank you sir." I said. "Call me Mike." I shook his hand. I heard a creek and 2 doctors rolled her bed into this room. "Y/N!" They both exclaimed. I covered my face. I peeked she was awake. I cried softly. "Louis? W-why are you crying?" Her parents saw me and whispered to her, "We'll leave you alone." They left and I went up to her. She pulled her hand up and grazed her hand on my cheek. I sighed. "I.. I...think I love you. I was so scared that you would die. It's all my fault." She looked shocked? "I love you too, Louis. I'm okay and it's not your fault." Before I knew it, she jerked my head right down to her lips. I kissed back of course. Maybe this day isn't so bad after all.
Your Point of View
He loves me? But wow! I'm kissing Louis! "Would you uh.. want to be my girlfriend?" I nodded vigorously. "What happened to your eye?" I sighed. "Eleanor." He nodded and kisses my cheek. My parents came back in and my dad said, "Congratulations son." His face turned happy and he shook my dad's hand. About an hour later they let me go home and boy was I tired. "Louis? Can you sleep at my house?" He nodded. "Of course, love." My parents drove us to there and my mom said, "No frickle frackle." I blushed. "No problem." Louis said happily. He carried me to bed and gave me some tea and pain killers. "I'm sor-" I cut Louis off. "Don't you dare apologize for Eleanor." He smiled. "Alright Mrs. Snappy Pants." He laughed. I glared, playfully. "Go to sleep." He kissed my cheek but I moved and his lips hit mine. I smirked. "Goodnight you little sneak." He got in next to me and cuddled me. This will be an sweet relationship. I love him so much. My truest wish just came true. "Goodnight sassy pants." I giggled and he kissed my cheek. Best. Turning. Out. Day. Ever.

I'm so sorry! It's been so long since I've updated. Here is a long one to make up for it!~Abby


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