This jokesue was made to show people how NOT to make a creepypasta oc. It's really cliché. So read at your own risk, and I'm sorry if this makes you flip out.
Real name: Lizzy Redwood
Creepypasta name: Lizzy The Killer
Not creative. Never make a copysue. By that I mean don't make your ocs creepypasta name be
"Laughing ______"
"_____ The Killer"
"_____ Drowned"
"Ticci ________"And etcetera.
Age: 16
CLICHÉ AGE.
#NOMORETEENS
Birthday: October 31
Classic Mary Sue birthday...
Species: human
Gender: female
Mother: dead
Father: dead
STOP WITH THE DEAD PARENT BULLCRAP. IT TAKES A LOT TO KILL YOUR PARENTS, ITS NOT FUNNY.
Appearance: raven black waist length hair with red tips, crimson red eyes, really pale, wears a purple hoodie, black skinny jeans, combat boots, she's really skinny and tall
Everything that's cliché about her appearance:
-waist length hair
-red eyes
-pale af
-hoodies are now cliché because of JTK
-skinny jeans.-.
-combat boots
-unless she exercises she shouldn't be skinny
Personality: bubbly, funny, joyful, creative, caring,
scary when angered"scary when angered"
Stop. If she's "joyful and caring" she isn't gonna be scary.
Back story: Lizzy grew up in a small town. She was always called a freak because she was born on Halloween. Her parents thought she was demonic and evil, so they treated her poorly. She was bullied so much she had to switch schools a few times. One morning her parents were yelling at her. She was sick of it. She finally snapped, and got a knife then stabbed her parents. She then ran out of the house and into the Slenderwoods. After running for a while she met slendermen and he took her to the slender mansion, where she officially became a creepypasta.
1). Bullied cliché
2). Abused cliché
3). Slaughtered her parents cliché
Also, the slender mansion isn't cannon.
Interaction with canon creepypasta is a sin.
Weapon: kitchen knife
There are other weapons out there... Plus stabbing people takes strength. A teen girl isn't gonna be strong enough for that--
Unless she works out but I doubt she does
Strengths: she's really fast and can fly
Again, she probably doesn't exercise and she's a human. How the fuck can she fly?
Weaknesses: when people tell her she's ugly
That's not a weakness--
Flaws: clumsy
Not a flaw, just something to make ocs look cute.
Creepypastas are supposed to be scary, not cute.
Friends: all the creepypastas!!!!!
Boyfriend: Jeff the Killer
INTERACTION WITH CANON CREEPYPASTAS IS A SINNNNNNN
PLUS KILLERS DON'T LOVE SO NO
If you have an oc like this,
BURN THEM!
The fandom is dying because of 9 year olds who claim to be insane and make ocs like this.
And I know, pretty much everyone has been there. Even me xD
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