Pineapple

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Book: Pineapple

Author: PandaFromMars

Cover: 7/10

Plot: 9/10

Summary: 8/10
• short and sweet :D

Characters: 9/10

Score: 33/40

Kookies:
There wasn't really anything that I needed to correct you on, since the whole story was in texting format. I'm a really big fan in these types of books, since they're easy to read and usually hilarious. Your book was extremely good and easy to follow, and I didn't think I was going to enjoy it as much as I did. Amazing job!

Notes for others to follow:
When writing a book in texting format, still try to keep the dialogue as English (or whatever language you write in) as possible. It gets annoying when every other word is an abbreviation or an emoji, and it also makes it hard for readers to understand your story. A few phrases and shortened words are fine, but keep in mind that not everyone uses texting jargon.

This type of book is not for everyone to write, but if you want to try it, keep my tips in mind and you should be good to go! Hwaiting!

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⏰ Last updated: Dec 13, 2015 ⏰

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