L x light "I love you light"(smut)

Part 1

Hi this is the first yaoi fanfic I have ever done. Tell me what you think about my first fanfic^-^
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Third person:
Light was waking to HQ where L waited for him. When Light arrived he didn't see L sitting in front of his computer as he usually does. Light went up to L's room to see if he were there.

      Light's POV:
"L?" I heard noises coming from his room. L kept on repeating my name "Light, Light, Light *huff huff*." When I entered I saw L on the floor with his pants off, his member was out. I felt my face flush. L didn't notice I was there for about a few moments I have been there. L turn to look at me. L's face was bright when he saw me.

{A few hours earlier}
L's POV:
  I had just called Light to tell him to come to HQ to discuss about something i think that leads to the Kira case. He said he'll be here in about 15 minutes. While I waited I was sitting down on the chair how I usually do facing the computer. I suddenly start thinking about Light. I get dirty thoughts about Light and I. I let out a small moan when I get those dirty thoughts. "I need to relief my self." I go up to my room and pull my pants down and hold my member. I start pumping my hand on my member. *huff huff huff...moan* "Light, Light , Light!" I was doing it for a good 5 minutes then I hear gasp behind me. I see light there bright red and shocked.
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