Nothing Seems Right

Of Children and Flowers

Just a few quick notes!

(Feel free to skip... I know I would! XD)

Hello, everyone. I was listening to the Undertale soundtrack, and just HAD to write something for this game! I was inspired! (I am also in love with Underfell, so that's what I am doing.)

Now, frisky (Get it?) things first: I do not plan on writing notes for every chapter, only if I have something important to say, so I dunno, read this is you what, I guess... I also have no idea what my chapter length will be.. I usually try to set a goal, but whatever...

When I feel like ending a chapter, I will. So, sorry in advance, if things are short. (Although, I am pretty lax on this story.. So hopefully chapters will be an okay length.)

ALSO! I am a fan of llllllooooonnnnngggg stories. So if you are starting now, prepare for another, what, 50 chapters? Okay, maybe that is a little too long (Although one of my previous fanfictions met, what, 56?) but this will AT LEAST hit the twenty mark...

Well, maybe.. Depends on chapter length! So, I will make no promises!

For posting times... Maybe every time I finish a chapter? Possibly weekly? You can tell me if you want a proper update schedule... Or else I have no idea... I guess I will just post at random. I am pre-writing some of the story though. At this point, I already have three chapters done!  :D

Now story notes -

I will be making Frisk use sign language. It will only be a small plot device, as I only know a tiny bit of sign language, but I will describe the occasional sign, every now and again.

I just CANNOT see Frisk as a boy, so she is a girl now. A young one. (Older Frisk is a no-no!)

I plan on making some Sans x Frisk fluff... But I do not plan on it being a large part of the story.

Okay, that's all for now... Enjoy the story!

Also, since I am posting this on Christmas eve... MERRY CHRISTMAS, EVERYONE! ^-^

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Pain.

Pain, pain, and you guessed it, pain!

A young girl laid out on a bed of flowers, golden and with only slightly wilted petals, to be exact. They must not have been taken care of. The human shook her head, messy brown hair flopping every which way, as she stood. Her almond brown eyes sparkled in the low light as she looked up, an extremely wide hole was sitting just above her.

'Did I fall?' Her own voice echoed through her mind.

The girl sighed, before making a move to stand up, but her back and head protested at the sudden jerking of movement. Pitifully, she ended up facedown in the bed of dirt and golden petals all over again.

"Howdy friend!" A small voice chirped from below, making the young girl jump at the sudden noise.

It sounded as if it came right from beside her, almost as if they were under her.

"Are you okay? Can you hear me?" The squeaky voice urged accompanied by something soft and flimsy prodding against the young child's head, pushing scraggly brown hair every which way.

The owner of said hair wanted to groan, the prodding didn't help the headache that was currently pounding her skull open in the slightest. Thus, she swatted at the offending creature harshly, all the while sitting up. But it was slowly and cautiously, this time. She knew how to learn from her mistakes.