Teen Drama

How to Ruin a Pentecostal's Rep(2017 Commentary)

Chapter 8

Kayden's POV

I woke up at 8:30 am. I had to prepare for the party. I couldn't wait for the party! I knew Allison never go to any of my parties,so this would mean a lot of time with Kelsey. [2017| Yeah say party one more time. I don't think you have your point across that this is a party.]

The pool was cleaned,the food was being cooked,and everything was laid out.

This is going to be perfect.

Allison's POV

I laid there motionless next to Kel. It was cold. I shook Kelsey's arm furiously. "WAKE UP!! COME ON!" She didn't respond. I saw her laying there,looking lifeless. It was like she was. [2017| What is happening? Is this where everything goes straight down hill?]

Kelsey's POV

I tried opening my eyes,but I couldn't. It was like they were glued shut. I heard Alli screaming and pulling at me. "I am waking up!",I groaned. I sat up in my bed. "Your house is cold!",she whined,"I want a blanket." Wait I thought we were dead? The wreck. " I thought we were dead. We were in a wreck!",I whispered. "Nightmare.",said Allison. I was sweating. I guess from the dream,but I've never done that before.[2017| What? A wreck? Wow. I just had to but so much drama in this, didn't I? Ugh. Carry on.]

I got out of bed and looked at my clock," It's 9:30 in the morning,Alli. We should be getting ready." She made a strange noise then got her laptop out of her overnight bag. "Oh god." She was clearly on Facebook, but on Alexandria's page. "Her status went from 'In A Relationship' to 'Single'. Wow, he broke up with her to be with you.",said Alli in shock. Dang. I am staring to feel sorry for him. You know,trying to get something he will clearly never get. I went to my dresser to see everything was there. "What happened last night?",I asked Allison as she was playing minecraft. "Well,as we were running up the stairs,you slipped and fell. The fall caused you to hit your head and go to sleep.",she told me as I got my swimsuit and such out,"I dragged you up the stairs and put you in your bed. At midnight you were crying so I climbed in bed with you."

" Oh."

******FLASHBACK******

"You never listen to me!",yelled my mom to my father.

"Amy! You need to calm down!"

[2017| Keep in mind, the mom's name is AMY. Just a little hint on my future mistakes.]

My four year old self had my back against the door,while I was getting hugged by my six year old sister that was older.[2017|Gee couldn't tell she was older.]  That was the night my mom got drunk and hurt my father,sister,and me.

The night before my father died.

******END OF FLASHBACK******

I shivered. I got on my tankini [2017| Gross.] and swimming dress,and walked out of the bathroom. "Oh no. You are not wearing THAT are you?",said my ridiculous sister," If you're going to a boy's party you are wearing something else." "I'm being modest!",I replied. "Today you are BREAKING THE RULES!",she said while pulling me into her room. My sister and I are my same size in swimsuits,so she handed me a strapless bikini top with multicolored,ruffled and some multicolored swim bottoms. "Put these on and slip the dress over it to go to your car." "Where did you get this?",I asked. "I don't tell you everything I get at the mall. Now, go go go!,she replied while pushing me into the bathroom.

Chapter 9

Allison's POV

She looked awesome! I think she will never take the dress off though. I'll take care of that at the party. "I need to get a photo of this!",I told Kel,"I've never seen you in a bikini so I need black mail!"[2017| Sure Allison, THAT'S why you wanted a picture of her...] "Fine but DON'T SHOW ANYONE!" I went to my Instagram camera cause my camera is buggy. I took a picture of my friend.

I clicked the wrong button to save it.

I think I posted it.

There goes our friendship.

"Umm..you done? I wanna but my dress on.",asked Kelsey. I sat there...shocked. I just won't tell her. I nodded. "Okay. Imma check my Instagram.", she said in an unsure way. "NO!",I yelled while grabbing her phone. "Why?"

"Cause.. You might ACCIDENTALLY post a picture of yourself."

"Oookay."

Safe.

Kayden's POV

It's 5 minutes till the party. I regretted inviting Alexandria though.[2017| What the actual heck?] She might've decided to not go. I couldn't wait to see Kelsey! Wait. What if she says no? I'll then use force.

I went down stairs to see a tan, brunette at my door.

It was Alexandria.

[2017| Two words for ya, Kayden: Restraining. Order.]