Chapter 1

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All Cinderpelt remembered was closing her eyes, and she gave in to Starclan to take her away. "Greetings, Cinderpelt." A voice mewed gently. Cinderpelt opened her eyes. She was in the clouds, she thought. Standing in front of her was Yellowfang, former medicine cat and her mentor.

"Y-Yellowfang??" Cinderpelt ran straight at Yellowfang and touched her nose. "Cinderpelt, I have an important message for you." Yellowfang touched her nose and backed away. "Starclan has given you a second chance. You were originally not going to be medicine cat. Starclan wants to make you meet your true destiny. You will be reborn into Cinderkit, one of Sorreltail's kits. And that is all I need to tell you, Cinderkit." Yellowfang meowed as she licked her former apprentice's shoulder.

"W-wait!! Yellowfang!!" Cinderpelt yowled as a bright light flashed in her eyes.

I'm becoming Cinderkit, she yowled silently. Another bang of white light hit her in the face, as she wailed in pain.

She was now in front of dead Sandstorm, claws unsheathed. Firestar was right in front of her, staring at her in pain. Cinderpelt felt like Tigerstar. Here it looks like she killed Sandstorm, but she knew this was a dream from the start.

"Y-you killed Sandstorm!! I loved her!!" Firestar was forming small tears in his eyes. Cinderpelt snapped out of her gaze and squealed like a kit when Firestar grabbed her.

Raking her belly, Cinderpelt meowed, "Firestar!! I swear I didn't do it!!". Firestar's eyes grew red and hissed out loud, "A cinder heart can be formed by hatred. Beware of the one with a cinder heart!!".

Cinderpelt was confused. Then, a white light hit her again. Why are you so bright??, Cinderpelt hissed silently.
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Cinderheart woke up, sweating heavily while Jayfeather was above her. "J-Jayfeather? Why am I here?" Cinderheart rubbed her eyes with her tail. "Lionblaze said you were screeching, 'A cinder heart can be formed by hatred.'" Jayfeather rolled his eyes. "You seem fine to me." Cinderheart blinked and padded away.

Outside, Brambleclaw was arranging patrols. "And for a hunting patrol.. I want Cinderheart, Dovewing, Ivypool, and--" Brambleclaw was interrupted by Firestar. "I will come too.".

Cinderheart's heart pumped. Her belly clenched. Yes! Firestar is coming too! Cinderheart cheered silently. She felt a nudge on her shoulder. "Are you coming?" Dovewing whispered.

Cinderheart nodded and padded away with Dovewing. Ivypool and Firestar was waiting at the exit already. They nodded heads and padded away from the camp.
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Firestar crept up at a mouse. Then he pounced. Suddenly, a crow fluttered past him, startled him, and led the mouse to run away. "Bad luck!" Firestar hissed. Cinderheart was behind him, laughing her head off.

"Aren't you supposed to be hunting?" He meowed angrily. "I was!" Cinderheart laughed. "I was chasing that crow!".

Firestar's eyes turned fiery. Fire blazed in his eyes. Cinderheart gasped. H-he's mad at me... Cinderheart wailed silently. Firestar snorted and padded away to taste the air.

Cinderheart's eyes grew in pain. Firestar was mad at her? Her head dropped and her tail drooped. How could this happen? She cried. She turned her head to look at Firestar again. Her neck bristled angrily.

I will get my revenge!!







Hai it's me Jaystar. I wanted to give credit to CrazystarThunderClan for inspiring me to make this!! Her story was more of Bumblestripe's pov though...

Bai!!

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