Darker than black(now editing)

The unexpected turn:leaf village

Edited: 3rd October 2015
Time:5:00-6:00

The scorching , vivid sun burned me alive , I, Hei was locked , trapped . How could this be ? My body was being shaken multiple times for the assurance of my existence however everything was a blur . Some one emerged towards me , this aura was lively , cheerful and yet deceiving , they uttered something like

"I , Nar ( I didn't catch all of it ) ...  Am here to protect you ! I will come for you , that is my ninja way!

Was it a dream ? A vision?  Some one was going to save my dear life ; I shrugged and laughed it off sarcastically. Surely my imagination had been distorted with these frequent passing out , they were definitely drugging me in high doses , so much for partying hard ! The security guard entered the gruesome cell which was covered in putrid dried up blood stains which were existence from other victims which had been beaten to death .

Wait.... Was I next ?
The bulky hit man's eye bulged out in pure anger ; it was evident that he was very eager to suck the living life out of me through torture !I clung on to my T-shirt tightly , that made my heart churn for my dear life , but as I favoured my pride over my life I approached my reckoning with my head held high , if I were to die it would be with honour , no regrets aigh ?! As I analysed his figure I noticed a rigid , newly bought slashing belt ; I was situated in his right hand , I was certain my death was going to be a tremblingly painful one (*sad face*).The hit man grinned ; boldly without uttering a word he elevated his bulky hands up and was getting ready to slash me when...
Edited:10th October 2015
Time: 3:00-4:00
BOOM!
At that very moment a enormous explosion occurred , a ray of hope, wouldn't you say ? There my saviour emerged out of the contaminating smoke that manifested in the opening of the blast. The figure in my vision appeared ,
It was ...
It was ...
A guy (😓, so much for sarcasm) .
He leaped with in a second of my breathe even faster than a cheetah and before I could celebrate my dramatic rescue , the figure punched the hit man who went flying like an army jet straight into a wall causing a humungous dent to form . I smirked , which was clearly visualised by the hit man, that caused him to become frustrated ,thus like a crazy bull he roared and got up . At the speed of lightening he charged at me as fast as a razor sharp piercing bullet racing a marathon , nevertheless , this masked figure wearing what look like the leaf village ; Hokage cope stopped the bullet with his two bear hands and directed it path the opposite way causing the jagged reckoning to painfully plunge in to the hit mans stomach . HE WAS PETRIFIED! With no else of remorse the Hokage , took his kunine and amazingly stabbed the hit man which left me dumbfounded ; the rate of the moment was breathe-taking my fast , I could acknowledge my luck .

Now the cell laid death still just like the midnight sky that forged amongst my shadow , the only voice I could hear was my heart beat , which had no doubtlessly risen. My ray of light once again emerged towards my brining a tranquil yet melancholy aura along with him . His face was a ornament formed from precious jewels , I couldn't express his attractive aura .He leaned over , just as I thought I was going to get a chance to repay his kindness , I was hit against the next and put to sleep The last words were " Don't worry , I Naruto am swore to protect you , we'll be safe " ; instantly my vision blackened !