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Book Review #2-Wish I could be your lover

Title- Wish I could be your lover

Author- orangelovesgreen

Genre- Fanfiction

Summary- This is a fantasy fanfic of Ethan Dolan. In this a normal Indian teenager named Aisha is scared of ghosts. She sleeps alone in her room. This makes her feel scary. But one night it happens to be so cold and scary that a ghost swallows her fear and drops it into the fear world. In the fear world the fear is transferred from the real earth to this fear world. Now the fun thing is the fear world helps get away the fear in you than to multiply it. Here the fears are in the form of humans. When she falls in the fear world , she dashes into one person known as Robert. He helps her through the new place *THE FEAR WORLD*. WILL THEY EVER LOVE EACH OTHER?? OR WILL THERE BE A MYSTERY LEFT BEHIND?? you will know what will happen if you read it;-)

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Book Review

Grammar- 8/10

Style and Tone- 9/10

Plot-9.5/10

Story Structure- 10/10

I found this story very interesting. It wasn't the normal kind of fanfiction story, but instead a very different one. This made the story very interesting. There were some grammar errors (ex: I think so he is in his dream world----) I think he is in his dream world) There were some places where you didn't but the right punctuation. But overall it did not affect the story much, so it was still understandable and interesting! (and you also wrote on the book, that you were editing it). I really like your writing style, it made the book sound like, a real conversation was going on between the characters. You described what the characters are doing with interesting words. I really like how you use different verbs and words, so you don't repeat the same word many times.* Just an opinion (you don't have to do it)- Is that you could describe where they are instead of directly saying it. EX: When they went to the beach, you could describe how the beach looks like. But overall, your writing style and tone is very unique and it makes the story alive. The plot and story structure left me with awe because you didn't write a normal fanfiction story, but you used a lot of fantasy (the fear world, ghost ball) in it. This made your story unique and different from the others (good way!!). 

Overall, I really liked your story! It was a very good written story and I loved every detail about it. It makes the reader just want to continue. I can't wait for the sequel to come out because I will defiantly read it!

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Would I recommend it to anyone?

YEP!

*Remember I'm not a professional book reviewer so these are all my opinions. If I offended you in anyways, I'm so sorry but I didn't mean it as an offense but just to point out the mistakes that you made. I want to help your book become better and more famous, not to offend and criticize it.

If you have any questions or problems, please comment me. Thanks :)