Title- Fate
Author- god_bless_america
Genre- Romance
Summary- A boy and a girl. a ginger and a blonde. a sophomore and a freshman. a theater kid and a church brat
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Book Review-
Grammar- 8/10
Style and Tone- 7/10
Plot-7.5/10
Story Structure- 6/10
I love it how this story is based on Indigo's friend, Cal and Allen. I couldn't really judge this book and give it a good ranking because you only wrote two chapters so if I give you low ranks, it's unfair. Because I don't know how the story will end or continue. I ranked this book according to these two chapters and what I thought about them. There are a few grammar errors but not so many, so they did not effect your book much. The punctuation mistakes are less in this book than the other, and I didn't see many. You did not capitalize the first letter in the sentence, but you wrote it in the introduction so that was not a problem. Your style and tone in this book are good. You use a conversational and narration style in this book and the tone is a chatty one. I can't really include anymore information because you only wrote two chapters. I still don't know how the plot will be, what the problem is but so far I like it. In first two chapters that you wrote, you wrote how the characters meet and what they feel about each other, mainly Cal's opinion. You wrote a good capturing introduction. I gave you a 6 in the story structure because you only wrote two chapters, so I don't know the problem, how it's going to resolve and those things. But with the two chapters that I do know, I think the structure is good. The same thing that I mentioned with your other book, is that you should make the chapters longer so that the readers will continue reading. Your chapters are a bit short. But don't worry, that is easy to correct because you still did not finish your book. Continue your hard work and writing! :) It will end good!
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Would I recommend it to anyone?
Yes.
*Remember I'm not a professional book reviewer so these are all my opinions. If I offended you in anyways, I'm so sorry but I didn't mean it as an offense but just to point out the mistakes that you made. I want to help your book become better and more famous, not to offend and criticize it.
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