Title- High School Story
Author- athleticsangel
Genre- Teen Fiction
Summary- It is about the life of the kids at Eden High, go through every heartbreak, every piece of drama and every friendship.
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Book Review-
Grammar- 9/10
Style and Tone- 10/10
Plot-10/10
Story Structure- 9/10
Amazing! Your first chapter automatically captured my attention to continue to read the story. I loved every bit of the story. For the grammar I gave you a 9 because there were a few mistakes, and also a couple of spelling mistakes or common spelling errors that you probably didn't realize you made (Ex- On chapter 9, you wrote waist instead of waste.) But your story was understandable with no problems. These mistakes didn't affect your story much, and you didn't make any punctuation errors. I was amazed by your writing skills, style and tone. You wrote described every little part, from how the characters (Ashley, Ava, ect) looked like to the rooms. In a story/book, one of the important things is to "show, don't tell" and I believe you succeed and accomplished this. In your work, you showed the characters, their lives, their rooms, their feelings. You didn't just write them but you expressed them. So I believe you deserved a 10 on this! :) The plot was very interesting and capturing at the very beginning of the chapter, and this caused the readers to continue the book until the end (well, end for now because more chapters are coming out and I can't wait to read them =) ) Your story begins with a problem, but the reader has no idea how it started so they want to read until they know what happened. This is a very good thing and something I enjoyed. I liked how you didn't write like a normal story but one that you can actually imagine being in it. The stories structure was very good, but I gave you a nine because I don't know how it is going to end so I couldn't judge it much but with what I know so far, it sounds good.
Overall, good job and I can't wait for more chapters to come out! :)
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Would I recommend it to anyone?
Yes, without hesitating!
*Remember I'm not a professional book reviewer so these are all my opinions. If I offended you in anyways, I'm so sorry but I didn't mean it as an offense but just to point out the mistakes that you made. I want to help your book become better and more famous, not to offend and criticize it.
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