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Book Review #4- Everything's Fine

Title- Everything's Fine

Author- RubyFruitJungle

Genre- Teen Fiction

Summary- "He was a coward, too scared to follow anybody's advice but his own; and that was what terrified him most of all." Nico Reed isn't thought of highly by anyone except for his best friend. To the world, he's a delinquent. He's trailer trash with a no-good family and no future. However, when somebody reaches out and tries to help him, he realizes that there is a chance he could live beyond what he's capable of and break the expectations the world has of him.

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Book Review

Grammar- 9/10

Style and Tone- 9/10

Plot-9/10

Story Structure- 9/10

I really enjoyed reading this story and it was really sad.. This story almost made me cried.. But I really liked it. There were a few grammar errors inside the story that you probably didn't realize but I didn't see any punctuation mistakes. Most of these mistakes weren't big ones so the story was understandable. You have very unique and creative writing skills, because you express your ideas creatively. You have a emphatic writing style, because you show strong feelings about the story that you are writing. That is a very strong characteristic because the readers will believe in what you write and relate to the story. It is like if you were sending them a message. You have a virtuous writing tone. I really like the story's plot because it is creative and you don't just focus on one point of view but many. This shows what other characters are thinking about and what they think about Nico. I like the problem in your story and wonder how Nico is going to resolve it. Your story's structure is put goodly with no problems. We still don't know the end yet so I can't give you full credit for story's structure. But with what I know so far, I really like it. You should totally continue writing and I'm sure you will get a lot of readers. Your story is very attracting and you capture the readers attention on the very first chapter. You describe everything in your story so the readers feel like they are part of the story. I really enjoyed reading it!

Overall, good job!! :)

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Would I recommend it to anyone?

Yes

*Remember I'm not a professional book reviewer so these are all my opinions. If I offended you in anyways, I'm so sorry but I didn't mean it as an offense but just to point out the mistakes that you made. I want to help your book become better and more famous, not to offend and criticize it.

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