Too late or just in time

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Zoeys P.O.V
It had been two days since Aphmau fainted she hasn't woken up , but has entered the crital mark . No body knows what to do . Aphmau thrashes around as if she were just sleeping but she is become more dehydrated and
Unstable ,there are times were she'll stop breathing or her pulse will sky rocket . I plan to go to the Yagrasil forset (I know I totally spelled that wrong ) if there is no word by tomorrow ,to get the antidote . I heard a frantic tapping noise on a window upstairs ,usually I would think it was levin or Malachi but they were at a sleepover with Kyle and Alexis . I go up stair and check the rooms ,saving aphmaus for last . As I entered her room I see Raven desperately trying to get in .Thats garroths wyvern ! I run up to the giant window opening it . "RAVEN do you have the antidote !" I ask immediately .raven noddes giveing me the bottle " thank you ,wait here so I can send a message back to Garroth ." I say poring the liquid into a needles since Aphmau was still in her mini comma . Frantically I searched
for a vein and give her the antidote . Raven watches with hopefully eyes . Hopefully She'll wake up soon . I write a letter starring how Aphmau is still in bad condition b it she has recived the antidote . I tell raven to follow me and i would give him some steak before he leaves as a treat he accepts it and I give him the letter to Garroth telling him to bring it to him . Raven nods and takes off , were we to late ?

Ok guys that's it for today annnnnd I'm doing a contest  . You need the following
Name:
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Winners will be announced on Monday !

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