Star Wars: Son of the force

The Aprentice

A long time ago, in a galaxy far far away...
On the system of Endor, Savage Opress was on a Jedi hunt for clearing the system, he was battling the last Jedi on the system, he was called Griel Cioprei, he was talented, he was able to hold a fight against Savage Opress and hold his attacks, but the strenght didn't last long, at the end Savage knocked him down and chopped Griel into half and then split his head.
On a bush near there, Shak Cioprei watched as his father died brutally to the hands of an horrible man. When Savage turned around heading back to his ship, Shak ran to the dead body of his father with tears in his eyes, Savage starred at him, at first he thought to kill the kid, but then he walked back to the kid and grab his arm. The kid starred at his yellow face, he scream "DEMON!" but savage didnt care. He pulled the kid back to his ship and took him to Dathomir, his home planet, because Maul couldn't know of the existance of the kid.
When they arrived to Dathomir, Svage took Shak to the village, both went to an underground room where there was enough space for the young Shak to live and be trained, no one should know of his existence so Savage advised his brothers to not say a single word to anyone.
Months passed by and the young apprentice had now his own lightsaber, it was long and green, different from other blades that have been seen on the hand of any jedi or sith. One night Savage teached Shak to retrieve his lightsaber with the force and some of the control of the force, when it was time for him to go back to Mandalore, Savage told him that when he came back he would finish his training with the force, but the promise couldn't be done, hours after Savage was back with Darth Maul, the Darth Sidious had murdered Savage, captured Maul, and conquered Mandalore, Shak had no idea of what happened for days until two nighsisters came to the basement. One proceeded to talk, "Shak Cioprei, we have bad news about your Master, we were communicated a few moments ago that he has been murdered by a Sith on Mandalore", Shak kept in silence, he didn't knew what to say, the nightsister got a bit closer to Shak and rubbed his cheek, then with a smile she said "but now that your master is gone, we can do everything we want with you" the nightsister started to take of her clothes and the other did too and stand behind Shak, he didn't move a milimiter, and his face was looking at the naked nightsister with no change on his expression, when the nightsister that was talking to him started to pull down Shak's pants, whit the force he pulled his lightsaber an chopped the head of the nighsister off, then he grabbed it and stabbed the other nightsister, both of them were death and Shak had an angry expression looking at the naked bodies of the nightsisters. He grabbed his blade and went to the outside in the village, he looked to a side and saw smoke and asked one of the man that was there, he said that the smoke had been there for months and that all nightsisters had been murdered by droids, including Mother Talzen and Old Daka. Shak started to walk towards it with the hope on finding a nightsister that could help him in his way but when he was close enough, he could see that all was in vain, it was true, the droid blasted every single nightsister to death, Shak sat on his knees and a tear dropped even whit his strenght, a tear o sadness and terror dropped. He knew that he lost his way.