: Part One of Voldemort's originChapter Text
Once people got back from their first restroom break, Officer McFinn started up the readings once again.
"The House of Gaunt." said Officer McFinn.
"If it's nothing like the Riddle House, I'll be happy." said Harry absently as he poured the chocolate over top of a many layered cake.
"Going to share that cub?" asked Sirius looking over at the cake with interest.
'Unless I smash this thing with my fist if this chapter goes awry." said Harry.
First paragraph, first sentence.
"Why is Snape looking like that?" asked Lee.
"When it comes to him, we don't ask his motives." said Fred.
"Mostly because we don't want to bring about injury to ourselves." said George.
First paragraph, second sentence.
Snape frowned. My handwriting is a thousand times better than that drunken, crab scrawl that Weasley tends to do.
End of first paragraph.
Dr. Nicodemus snickered.
Second paragraph.
Snape's eyes flashed wider.
Dialogue set.
A slight color of pink formed on Snape's cheeks.
Dialogue line.
Third paragraph.
"At least Ron was sort of trying to do his homework instead of picking fights." said Charlie. "Granted, it's copying, but that's just nitpicking."
Fourth paragraph.
Dialogue line.
Dialogue line.
"Guess you just need to mention a lesson that doesn't have anything to do with Potions and her mood will shoot right back up." said Dean.
Dialogue line.
Fifth paragraph.
Dialogue set.
Sixth paragraph.
Dialogue set, first sentence, fourth comma.
Mrs. McFinn giggled. "Yes it is."
End of dialogue set.
Dialogue set.
Seventh paragraph.
Dialogue line.
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FantasyUmbridge was watching her class, containing the Gryffindor and Slytherin fifth years, as they read her "Ministry Approved" textbook. She was confident in the knowledge that now; there was no way that they were going to rise up against the Ministry...
