Part 132

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: Maternal BoggartNotes:

Okay, I didn't post last week because I had a lot of stuff that I had to get done before Christmas. I finished my little cousin's boxes. (They don't look like they took a long time but holy crap did they ever, and I had to redo a few!) And today I was working on my gingerbread village...which isn't done either. But while I was recuperating I did have time to polish this chapter up.

The next update will...hopefully happen next week. There will definitely be a new story starting on Christmas Day, so you all have until Christmas eve to go to my profile page on Fanfiction.net and vote for the story that you want.

Chapter Text

First paragraph, first sentence.

"I don't blame you, he abandoned you again!" said Mrs. Weasley, looking furiously over to the Headmaster.

Dumbledore looked shamefully down at his hands.

First paragraph, sixth sentence, fourth comma.

"Didn't know if I was able to go or if they were going to arrest me for something else." said Harry.

"I suppose we should have told you. Albus, as the adult that was solely on your side, should have said you were free to go." said Madam Bones.

Dumbledore continued to look down, his hands becoming more and more tense.

End of first paragraph.

"I personally would have sprinted out of there." said Charlie.

Second paragraph.

Dialogue line.

"He should have." said McGonagall sending Dumbledore a stern look.

Dialogue line.

Third paragraph.

Dialogue set, second sentence, second comma.

"Not without lack of trying." said Hermione looking angrily at the ground.

End of dialogue set.

Fourth paragarph.

Dialogue set.

"It was...it seemed...so excessive." said Mr. Weasley.

"Indeed it was." said Madam Bones with a frown.

Dialogue line.

Fifth paragraph, first sentence.

"Not enough of them were ashamed of themselves for agreeing to pander to Cornelius." said Madam Bones shaking her head.

Fifth paragraph, third sentence.

"She creeped the hell out of me." said Harry with a smirk.

"She still creeps the hell out of me." said Ron.

End of fifth paragraph.

Mrs. Weasley looked between her third son and her husband, she smiled softly when they both smiled at each other.

Dialogue set, second sentence.

"Picky picky..." said Sirius with a chuckle.

"Shut up." said Remus shaking his head.

End of dialogue set.

Dialogue set.

"Oh sweetie...I'm happy for you...but I wish this place was safer." said Mrs. McFinn.

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