Best Friends?

Chapter 6

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Chapter 6 - Waking up!

Brett's POV

Totally darkness. If I didn't hear the familiar voices I would have felt alone. When I first heard them I thought I was dead but I knew the were real and I was alive. Then I thought I was blind but I couldn't move, so I finally came up with the conclusion that I was in a coma. It made sense to me. And remembering I was shot it just seemed more believable.

I'm thankful that I can hear people it made me feel less lonely and it meant I was still alive, but I also hate it, hearing my family cry while I can't do anything. It made me feel like I was 11 again when Mum died, I watched everyone cry. Dad was the worst he went silent for weeks didn't talk to me, wouldn't go to work. If I didn't have Christie there to comfort me I don't what would have happened. Christie's mum, Cathy helped too. She helped Dad with his problems and got him to work. I guess that she knew how Dad felt when she lost Christie's dad.

Thinking about this made me think what Dad is like now, he must feel like he lost me too. Had he gone back to being isolated and staying in the house again. My negative thoughts were killed when I heard Dad's voice and I instantly perked up. He must have waited for Grandad to get better. Then I was knocked down when I heard Dad begin to cry, Aunt June comforting him telling him everything will be fine. I heard Christie and Dad cry alot while I remained in my coma. I wished I was dead at least then I couldn't hear the painful cries.

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It's been almost a month since I was shot, I know because the Dad says the date to me every day, just in case I can hear him. That helped because I felt like I was awake and having a conversation with him.

All my friends have visited me, bringing me gifts and talking to me. Abby came with Danny, Vicky and Peter (not my cousin Peter but the Peter) Abby told me about school and how everyone is hoping I get better, Danny only saying hello when they came. Vicky cried alot saying it was her fault that I was in a coma, she shouldn't have gotten drunk. I wanted to tell her it wasn't it's the bastard, Ryan's. But I still couldn't move. Peter, just like Danny not speaking much. After them Emma came, she brought my iPhone with her.

"I put on some songs you would like and I put One Direction on too." She mumbles

"He doesn't like One Direction." Christie says

"I know I just wanted to get him to like them because they have a concert coming soon and I was hoping all the gang could come."

"Thats if he wakes up." My dad adds

She put the earphones in and played a new One Direction song I don't know the title but it was about a girl who kept thinking she wasn't beautiful but she was. I don't listen to One Direction much only when Emma is around but this was kinda good. Emma left soon after she gave me the phone.

I'm listening to a old, but awesome Hollywood Undead song when the earphones are taken out of my ears.

"Sorry but this might interfere with the machines." A woman says

I'm put back into the silence of the hospital. Hearing the odd baby cry or the passerby talking. Then Dad speaks up

"Come son, wake up. I lost your mother not you as well, please wake up." He starts to sob again. A couple seconds later a nurse come into the room asking Dad and Christie if the wanted anything. Christie is still holding my hand, it's been the so long that when she takes it away I feel like part of my arm has gone. Later my Dad goes to sleep after being threatened by the nurse, his snoring fills the room. But Christie speaks over it, she says my name then asks for me to squeeze her hand or wake up, the usual stuff I try and fail each time. Then she says something that shocks me