MaNan FF - I HATE HER BUT I LOVE HER

PROLOGUE

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I HATE HER BUT I LOVE HER
this is the name of my ff

INDRODUCTION
NANDINI MURTHY: a sweet beautiful girl..who always thinks about others..always have a smile on her face..but no one can see the pain behind it .. few incident changed her life..now she is no more of a person she used to be but have a dark secret.....a very dark..

MANIK MALHOTRA: a very arrogant and rude person..once had changed for her star but has again slipped into his world.. he is ony good to his friends that is FAB 5 and his father.. lead singer of fab 5 and owner of NM COMPANY.... misses his star alot but never shows it...

CABIR DHAWAN: best friend of manik..knows him in and out..knows how much he misses his star...boyfriend of navya....loves nandini as his sister... misses her.... drummer of fab 5

MUKTI VARDHAN: like a sister to manik....girlfriend of abhimanyu....bestfriend of alya and navya...misses her choti alot but doesnt show it to anyone.... guitarist of fab 5

ALYA SAXENA: fashion diva.... like a sister to manik and cabir...girlfriend of dhruv....misses her babe alot.....but does not show it.... plays keyboard...

DHRUV VEDANT: brother to manik... boyfriend of alya...shy types....misses her bestfriend alot....guitarist of fab 5

NAVYA NAVELI: like a sister to manik...girlfriend of cabir... misses her bestfriend alot....

ABHIMANYU THAKKAR: boyfriend of mukti... misses her choti alot....does not have cancer...runs an NGO for poor

MANVIK MALHOTRA: father of manik..loves him alot... misses her princess but do not show..currently living in USA taking care of his company over there...

NYONIKA MALHOTRA : hates nandini...mother of manik... have done something for which she is scared now ....

guys this is the story which has a mixture of many FF so please tell how it is

PROLOGUE:

MANIK's POV :

i was sitting in my office totally frustated ... aggg i hate cabir .. he promised me that he will take the interview for my PA but no he did not now i am seeing all stupid people....i called the other person in..and then suddenly..
MAY I COME IN SIR..
i heard her voice .. the voice which i was dying to hear ..the voice which gives me peace...... i immeadiately looked up and yes it was her ... my star...but she looked pale and more thin than she was before...that glow on her face was missing..but still she looked beautiful...i saw her expression she was shocked.......

NANDINI'S POV:
i was sitting on the chair waiting for my chance when suddenly someone came and told me to go in.. as i went in i saw him...my life ...looking sinfully hot he was staring at me while i was shocked.... i did not have courage to face him so i turned to leave but he called me
' u are joinig from tomorrow as my PA ... "
he said and went....

MANIK' POV
i saw her leaving ..i was angry on her and of course even hated her and now was the only chance i can take my revenge....i said that now she is my PA and left from there...

as i went out i said to myself: welcome to hell miss.nandini murthy.. and smirked....

please tell how is it ..please be honest