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Listen I know that you guys hate notes but I would really like to share some infomation with you that I hope you guys are interested in. Currently I'm starting a horror story called 'Charlotte's Whisper's', it's about The Wanted again but in this Tom's the main character instead of Jay.
Anyway I've have basically written out one of the chapters for you to read as a little snippet because I really wanna know if you guys think I should continue! :D
Anyway here is the scene when Tom goes to visit Harold Starkey, a man who use to work at the house where strange things are happening. They have a chat and Tom's about to leave when Siva runs in saying something's wrong with Nathan...............
CHARLOTTE'S WHISPERS PREVIEW:
"Do you belive in ghost's Tom?"
Harold asked whilst tapping his wrinkly fingers together, peering over the dirty lenses of his glasses with small dark eyes. They looked like they were once blue but had lost their sparkle and turned into murky dull cricles.
It was a fair question, did I believe in thee paranormal? The dead souls that had been trapped on this planet in purgatory? Surely after everything I had read and experienced it should be a deffinite yes, however....... I don't know if I can bring myself to believe something considered full of such nonsense.
"I..I don't.... think so?"
I answered furrowing my brow. Harold let out a shaky sigh before taking his walking stick and waddling over to the window, the way he frowned made his wrinkles sink deeper making him look more miserable than ever.
"Charlotte didn't at first... but she learnt"
"Charlotte?"
That was a name I had heard before, although at this point in time I was deffinitely not pinning it to the face.
"Whose Charlotte?" I asked again
"She was the girl who wrote the letters..."
The letters, presumably he means the one's I found under Jay's bed and read before this whole thing started. The poor little thing obviously had a vivid imagination, then again..... having a vivid imagination seems to be reliving more reality than normal at the moment. I had completely forgotten about the scrawnly written notes, I had been completely tied up with Nathan and the night terrors. Bless him.
"When she was alive I remember her having nightmares constantly about these so called characters in her room. Slowly they apparently became her friends.... The more 'friends' she made the more insane she became, soon enough they put her in the mental hospital. She was only 9, she tried to escape so many times that she actually went to the extent of murdering a man. It was only then that they decided to....."
"Shock her"
I finished, gulping back the massive lump thast had formed in my throat and was beginning to push against my skin. I know times were differnt but electric shocking a 9 year old to death still doesn't seem right to me.
"God rest her soul"
Harold muttered before turning to me with a stern look in his harsh blue eyes, his old split lips quivering and his hunched over body turning to stone. Metorphorically anyway.
"Listen to me boy, Charlotte was put through so much distress in her life that any of the living are like them to her. With death the other child spirits that lived in the house brought evil into her blood and now she wont stop until she made every last resident in your house feel her pain, including you"
Chills ran up my spine as I turned to Harold trying to conjur up a reply but I didn't have a chance before Siva ran into the scrappy little room of the old peoples home. Panic and fear shon in his eyes as he panted heavily.
"T..Tom it's Nathan! He screaming something about..."
He didn't even need to finish before I had took to my feet and were speeding down the corridoor with Siva running and Harold hobbling behind me. Once I reached the reception their was already a circled crowd forming that the three of us had to push through to reach the scene.
Nathan was screaming at the top of his lungs, the veins popping out of his neck and his green eyes as big as saucers. Max and Jay tried to hold him down, his back was arched so far into the air it looked like it would snap in half. Although what he was screaming, terrified me more than anything.....
"HE HAS ABANDONED US!"
Despite my fear I rushed over to the skinny boy and took in my arms, cradling him as he writhed and screamed. Something's not right here, all of this stuff that has been happening to him has to be linked.
"Who's abandoned us?! Come on Nath, you can tell me!"
"God! God has abadoned us!" He screamed back so harshly that it made my hairs stand fully on edge.
I need to calm him down, I need to do something before he end up hurting himself or maybe even braking his spine.
"Nathan! Nathan! Relax, come on mate you can do this..."
It took about minutes for him to eventually calm down into an exhausted mess, his eyes were half closed and his body lay completely limp against my chest. He looked like he was going to completely pass out.
"T..Tom?" He whimpered starring up at me
" Yeah?"
His breath became raspy as he drifted off to sleep only managing to get his last few words out.
"She's here, behind you"
"Who?" I replied shakily
"Charlotte....."
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