In Exile

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So for my Writer's Craft class, since most of our school population lives in the suburbs, we had a discussion about whether or not we like it. Most of us like the city better - good ol' Toronto - but anyways, this was my poem about the suburbs where I now live :)

In Exile...

All shine

And pristine glow

Perfect parked cars with

Emblazoned logos on display

Polished extra bright.

All green

And dull gray

Immaculate lawns

And swept cement

Where scraped knees go.

Tall oaks

Over fallen bikes

Toys strewn on quaint porches

Where the boy and the girl-next-door

Played house.

One person

For every dog

And cats slink through trimmed hedges

Where fathers still call daughters

Young Lady.

Breakfast clanking

And dinner thanking

That happy family unit

Hiding beneath just-right smiles

Those shiny suburbs are our exile.

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