Holy crap guys, I wrote a book. I WROTE A BOOK. I WROTE A FREAKING BOOK!!!
Umm I don't really know what to write here other than, I wrote a book that's NOT terrible, so I'll just tell you why it IS terrible...
-Too much dialog
-Chapters are too short
-Vania died
-VANIA FREAKING DIED
-Vania seems more dim-witted then she was supposed to
-Sol is a prick at some points
-There was a terrible battle in the last chapter, that was only there to make the chapter over 1000 words.
-Now I have to incorporate the "trust nobody" thing
-I REALLY want more draconic chamber.
-I had to keep in SOOOO many secrets that will be in book 2
-Nobody gave me ideas, despite my constant request of "I want ideas. anything. maybe even a personalized character." (Actually, one of my friends suggested I describe the characters more, so I did)
-I don't know anymore. I'm just really happy that I wrote a book.
Now you might hate the book, but that's ok. I plan to improve on all of these things in book 2. Especially my favorite character dying. Yes, Vania's my favorite character. Also things are gonna be longer, and more "lord of the rings-ish" (btw, I just watched those movies for the first time, and I LOVED them)
YOU ARE READING
Solomon's Challenge Book 1: Zerek the King
FantasíaWhen Solomon was very young, his family was massacred by the evil King Zerek Dramaura. Now that Solomon is 16, Zerek is sending people to hunt him down to kill the last member of the seven ancient dragon families, which will give him unlimited power...
