I was reading over this story and it's not very good at all.I was only around the age of 11 or 12 when I wrote it,my grammar was horrible,the dialogue was bad and the whole setup of the story wasn't interesting enough.I may start writing again.I need some lessons in writing though.I get someone on wattpad who has great dialogue and story lines to teach me how to write better.
I'd like to also say even though I hated this story thanks to the people that were reading it.💕😊
