EDIT: Chapter One has been rewritten! Please let me know what you think!
Hey guys, it's me (the biggest disappointment you know)! Yup, it's Ship or as you likely know me 'that one writer who never shows up'. Or maybe you know me as CookieClickerAddict. I know I've been gone a long time without any word of updates or anything. And I'm sorry. But I've been thinking a lot about this story. I love this story, don't get me wrong. It's my baby and even though I'm not writing for it, I still think about it all the time. But reading it over now, I'm not satisfied with the way it's currently written. I've gotten a bit better in my writing, now I ain't exactly a master but it's better, and I've been thinking about making a re-write. The entire story will remain largely the same, of course. But maybe some things will be more explained or properly included. Y'know, that kind of stuff. So, here's my question for you all. If I rewrote this, would you all read it? Should I even rewrite at all? I'm really hoping to get some feedback on this, as it will basically decide the fate of this story. I'll probably just erase a chapter and rewrite it, then post it, so I'm not gonna make the rewrite a separate thing, assuming it even happens. But yeah! Should I rewrite? Would you read it? Please leave a comment telling me what you think, I'm eager to hear your response! Sorry for being dead and hopefully, the potential rewrite will whip my ass back into shape.
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Tainted Balance
FanfictionJordan had always only wanted to serve His Lady Ianite. He followed every order to the best of his abilities, tried to keep the balance, and just tried to serve his goddess as best he could. But one day, Ianite gives him a strange task involving.. T...
