My own Gravity Falls like thing?

Out of the coma/poor Rose

'That's impossible I must be imagining things' Bill thought surprisingly he hadn't realized Thorn leaving so he was now in the room alone with Kat as he then heard a weak and faint voice "but your not" Kat said reading his mind as she slowly raised up looking at him with a light smile on her face and he begins to stare in her general direction looking genuinely happy for once in his cold darkened life she was the one who brightened it after all next thing he knew doctors where coming in and saw her wakened state and told Bill that she is ready to go home then Bill escorted her home

THE NEXT DAY

Kat was finally back on her feet again a little and she started to go to classes again as she and Rose started talking again something strange was happening with Rose she seemed to be getting a little more distant until one day Kat and Rose decided to hang out and while we were walking to the park a car was swerving on the road past the yellow lines and across the white line and kat realized where the car was headed as she tried to use her new magical abilities to protect her but sadly she didn't have enough power to do so as I watched in horror as the car struck Rose missing Kat by centimeters as the car swerved off the road leaving a bloody Rose in the road as Kat ran to Rose's dead and bloody body lying on the road.