Naruto love story: Saskue's jar of hearts (Editing)

Stop GARAA!!

-Saskue's pov-

"Yumi his chakra it's.........not human",I said jumping from tree to tree.

"I know I feel bad for him", she said liking at me.

"why, he tried to kill Lee",I said looking back at her.

"if you had a evil voice telling you to kill people every 4 minutes you would turn out like him to", she said looking at me with a stern face.

"hm,I guess your right",I said looking forward.

"were getting closer", she said stopping.

"why are you stopping",I asked landing next to her.

She then cut her hand and garaa appeared.

"bright idea",I said pulling out two kunai.

"I know right", she said making hand signs.

"Saskue don't kill him just try and capture him and calm him down", she said making a single hand sign.

"I'll try",I said jumping up to the branch that garaa was on hid sands was covering up half his body forming into a monster.

"Yumi hopefully your plan will work",I said holding up one of my kunai to my face charging towards garaa.

-Yumi's pov-

I looked up to see Saskue fighting well at lease trying to fight garaa he can't even get pass his sands shield.

"Saskue step back",I yelled making more hand signs.

I think you guys are forgetting that I don't only use shadow styles.

-FLASHBACK-

"Yumi I'm going to teach you a very dangerous jutsu but be careful when you use it", pain said Turing his back to me.

"what's it called father",I asked smiling.

"it's made for people with special chakra you can use this to take your enemies chakra and use it as a weapon against only that person if anything goes wrong you could kill yourself or the people around you like I said only use this when you're in danger", pain said with a stern tone.

-FLASHBACK OVER-

I kept that jutsu in mind just in case of and emergency.

I finally finished the hand signs.

"SASKUE MOVE!!,  NINJA ART:  CHAKRA EXTRACTING JUTSU",I yelled focusing it towards garaa.

I held my hand up as chains shot from my arms gripping onto garaa.

A tear then fell from my eye.

"I'm sorry garaa",I said using the chain extracting............................nothing!!!

"what's going on garaa what are you",I yelled looking at him.

He then looked down at me and smiled "he's not here anymore he's taking a nap",he said jumping down towards me.

I was ready to block until naruto kicked him into tree.

I then jumped next to Saskue.

"Saskue",I said pulling out my chakra attached Shurekin.

"I know we have to wake garaa up the tail beast..... it's controlling him", he said making hand signs.

"fire style: fire ball jutsu!!", he yelled as flute shot from his mouth towards garaa.

"give it your all",I yelled down towards sakura and naruto.

"believe it!!", naruto yelled jumping down to garaa.

He then started to run "TAKE THIS STRAIGHT FROM THE TEACHINGS OF KAKASHI-SENSAI A THOUSAND YEARS OF DEATH", he yelled pulling out a kunai stabbing the beast in the behind.

We all then sweatdropped until the beast back with his tail.

Naruto then smirked "boom", he said as a paper bomb went off blowing up past of the beast.

Smoke then formed me and Saskue exchanged looks and jumped in.

I ran towards garaa getting ready to punch him in the face but.......I couldn't.

My body went limp and I...hugged him.

"garaa please wake up when I first saw you I felt your aura of pain and never having the chance to hear someone say they love you........garaa your ate loved naruto...Naruto....he understands you more then anything you guys are no different than me and the others please come to your senses..... WAKE UP PLEASE",I yelled  jumping away pulling my chakra string to pin him down.

"Saskue now put him under a genjutsu",I said as a tear feel from my eye.

But before he could the beast took control and was getting ready to sweep him away until sakura stepped into Saskue's place being tied to a tree by sands.

I released my chakra strings and have naruto a look.

He nodded and smiled.

We both started to run towards garaa with our hands shaped as fist.

"GARAA WAKE UP AND STOP IT ALREADY!!", we yelled in sync punching garaa's face.

We watched as he fell back.

" SAKURA WE CAN'T BACK DOWN NOT RIGHT NOW.................. DON'T CLOSE YOUR EYES WERE ALL IN THIS TOGETHER WE DRAW THE LINE RIGHT HERE............THERE'S TO MUCH A STAKE THIS IS SERIOUS DONT COWARD AWAY WE CAN'T PRETEND THIS ISN'T HAPPENING IN FRONT OF OUR EYES",I yelled looking at sakura.

(hehe stole from camp rock lol)

She then broke out of the sand and jumped next to me.

"let's see if he's still awoke if so I'm pounding some sense into him", sakura said punching her fist together.

I walked over to him and saw that he was back to normal just the Kankaro and teamari jumped infront of me and picked him up.

"wait....Yumi I wish to thank you and naruto I can truly call you two my friends", he said as his brother and sister took him away.

I turned around landed next to Saskue.

"tired yet",I said deactivating my curse Mark and so did Saskue.

"cause......I.....am",I said falling limp passing out.

-Saskue pov-

I caught Yumi before she fell but I soon passed out as well.

-Naruto pov-

"hmm, well it looks like the love birds passed out",I said making hand signs.

"shadow clone jutsu",I said making 3 clones because sakura passed out to.

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here goes another one you guys I'm on a roll today I did three stories so far

I no own naruto :p