Best Surprise Ever

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3rd Person P.O.V

This week is the week that Lucas promised Rayen he would come to Boca Raton and see her in person for the first time and of course she has been thinking about it since she woke up sleepless at 7:16 this morning.

She is on edge and every time she hears the tires of a car close to her house; she gets a little nervous and slightly speed walks to the window next to her front door. Rayen is so excited for Lucas to get here that she almost forgot how important today is. She is quickly reminded when she gets a Facebook notification that says "Luna Simmons tagged you in a post".

"What foolishness did my momma tag me in today?" Rayen asks herself. She clicks on the notification only to discover that her sometimes corny mother was posting about the day Rayen was born.

It says something along the lines of "On this day, 19 years ago. Yes 19 years; my unique, outspoken, talented, fun-sized daughter was born. Although she was about 4 weeks early and definitely unplanned, I'm so happy to have my one and only. I love you Rayen Simmons and I miss you so much. I'm proud of you and I hope you enjoy your special day 😘, but sweetie please be careful. I don't wanna have to embarrass you on your birthday lol".

"After all that she puts lol? Okay, I appreciate the embarrassment, and she wonders where I get the craziness from. Wait. How the hell did I forget my own birthday though?" She questions herself.

Within 2 hours time it was around 1:30 in the afternoon. She gets a text from Zaddy Lucas as she has him labeled in her phone.

"Good morning baby!!! Just wanted to tell you happy birthday and I love you. I gotta surprise for you but I'm not gonna tell you what it is yet 😂🍇." Lucas texts.

"Awe thank you Zaddy. I can't wait to see you and I'm okay with that, I like surprises. I swear you love that damn grape emoji though😂." Rayen texts back.

"Okay, you got jokes this morning 😂😂😂." Lucas responds.

"What's your address? I'm gonna send something in the mail fah ya." Lucas continues.

"133 Summit Hill Drive, Boca Raton, FL 33428. I'll be waiting on it." She responds. Then the conversation halts.

Lucas's P.O.V

This week I'm supposed to go see my baby in person for the first time. I'm nervous as hell and I don't know what is gonna happen but for now I gotta go catch this flight.

I made sure the first time she told me her birthday, to save it so I wouldn't forget. What's better than going to see someone for their birthday and she doesn't even know I'm coming today. I had to make sure to tell her happy birthday this morning or she was gone be mad at me.

I asked my bro Troy to come with me, not on no third wheeling shit, but just because Boca Raton is a nice ass place. He might even meet somebody out there.

Since there is a three hour difference where she lives I'm probably gonna be hella jet lag when I get there. To be honest wit you all I care about is seeing her.

Imma ask for her address and tell her I'm sending her something so she doesn't think otherwise. Yeah I got this shit all planned out. While I'm on this plane I guess I can get some sleep.

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I woke up just before we landed because the fucking plane kept shakin'. I don't like that shit, but I do it for my baby.

When I get to Boca Raton I get a Uber for me and my bro. It's even nicer when you here. As soon as the Uber driver pulls up I tell him the address and try my hardest to ease my mind cause now I'm really trippin'.

"So are you guys from here or you just visiting?" the Uber driver asks politely.

"Nah we just here visiting." Me and Troy answer simply.

"Oh okay, well I hope you guys enjoy your stay. Boca is a really nice city." the driver says.

"Thank you sir." I say respectfully.

It takes us 20 minutes to get to Rayen's neighborhood. We were all looking at the house numbers to make sure I don't pass her house by.

"Aye thats it right dere ain't it?" Troy says all-of-a-sudden.

"Yeah it say 133 right?" I ask sitting up and looking out the window.

" 'Scuse me sir can you turn right here?" I ask the Uber driver. Without saying a word and giving a simple nod the Uber driver turns and pulls up to the house with the numbers 1-3-3 in bronze plastered beside the door.

Me and Troy thank the Uber driver and pay him for his services. I keep trying to tell myself to calm down and even Troy can see how nervous I am. I stand in front of the door for a few seconds tryna get my thoughts together.

"Be cool bro, you got it." I hear Troy telling me. Shit I wish it was that easy to just be cool, but I'll take his advice cause I swear I'm goin' crazy right now.

"Alright here we go." I say to myself as I step forward and knock on Rayen's front door.

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