Hi guys so I just thought I would right a few sentence of Chapter four because its confusing and I just hope you get a better idea of that chapter... Thanks
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CHAPTER FOUR: BRAVE NEW WORLD
So the main thing is why did Isabelle kill Mrs Henry?
- Honestly, I only brought Mrs Henry into my story to kill her off basically that is it. Mrs Henry was never going to be part of this story longer then 2/3 chapters. Why? Because Mrs Henry isn't exactly a main character of this story, she didn't really have any back story on her, nothing I could really explain in a chapter just about her. It's like them characters in books that are completely useless and have nothing to do, Mrs Henry wasn't important and trying to write about a character that I have no idea what to write about it exceptionally hard! hahaha.
Who is Martha and why is she in this story?
-Martha is just like Mrs Henry, she's just another character who I couldn't really carry on. That's why further on into the story I hardly spoke about Martha. She was just like a little filler to make the chapter a little longer to be honest.
Why did I write the killing scene with Isabelle and Mrs Henry like I did?
- I'm honestly going to say this, but I'm most probably one of the worst people to write a death scene and anything like that. I can write to a certain extent but it just ends up lame you know... I did like writing the chapter about her killing Mrs Henry but I could of made it more dramatic maybe like something more gruesome but then like I said before I can't write a good dramatic chapter but I did try...
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Transitioning
VampireIsabelle was an ordinary girl but that all changed when she turned 17. She was linked to her father's bloodline which turned some of the line into vampires. As she finds out about her new life she goes off to Nova Scotia and becomes a student at Lad...
