Alright, its been almost a year since I uploaded this story. I decided that I didn't like the ending much and that I wanted there to be WAY cooler fight scenes (that is no promise.). My writing will now be a little different. Also, I have deleted the original story beyond this point and will now write a whole different ending, so forget what you've read. Im hoping to make this ending a little better, so give it a chance! If you find an error anywhere please don't restrain from commenting. This includes:
Grammar errors, spelling errors, punctuation errors, or plot holes. I really hate plot holes and I want to make sure that my writing doesn't have any. Oh, and also, the one punctuation error that you can not correct is 'Im' because no one has time for that. But just plain rude or mean comments are not appreciated. Although, constructive suggestions are gladly appreciated and welcomed by yours truly. Anyway, enjoy!
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The Hourglass
FantasyShe fought, but in the end her heart won out and because she could not kill him, she simply trapped him. Forever. ____________________________________ I ran through the woods. The trees seemed to bend towards me. The farther I went, the darker the...
