[OUTDATED] Hair Dye & Daddy Issues//How To Prevent Making a Creepypasta Mary Sue

☠ MARY SUE SPOTLIGHT ☠

Part One: Rosetta Vein

(You're probably wondering, what the fuck is this? Well, I'll educate you, dear friend. I have fresh sources of OCs that reek of Mary Sue, and fear not, I don't jump to nastiness. I and the Pastamothers, as we're so kindly referred to, give constructive criticism to those in need. Most of the time it's laughs when they lash out. We've tried RPing with them too. So I'm doing this as examples of what you really should refrain from creating. Enjoy.)

Oh boy. Here we go. Lemme tell you a lil story, friends.

Months ago I started joining Creepypasta RP groups. From what I saw, most of it wasn't pretty. Mary Sues round every corner, I was slightly afraid.

I found one and decided, hey, might not be that bad, I'll RP with this painfully emo-looking girl. Wanna know something? It fucking was.

A girl by the name of Rosetta Vein replied to me about her post with simply, "bio and pic" just like that. I kindly informed her that I didn't do that at the time since I don't necessarily like to use other people's art to claim as my OC (I use refs, not faceclaims, twit >:v) and she then told me no. I had to question it, and told her I was literate and didn't see the need for bios really considering you can find out about the OC through the plot. I kid you not, the bitch snapped and told me to get out of there before blocking me for no apparent reason.

(If you're wondering why screenshots look different in format, my friend so kindly dug up this one for me.) But proof ^

You say you hate literate people, Rosetta, but as soon as I got my RP account and became admin of the group you were all over Jeff.

Her character is worse than I imagined. Yes, I played Jeff how he's supposed to be: cold and jittery, mad and heartless. Legitimate sociopath. And what was her character like, you ask? She cried when Jeff spoke to her the way he would. What did she think? Was Jeff going to fall in love with her? How do you fall in love with that? Here are some shots.