Guys I'm so sorry about my mistake
Here at my "poem of emotions"
This is the corrected one:
Chockslam!
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On my life you came
And was tricked by your stupid game
Then I realized that you've fooled me
Saying to me"I'm sorry"
That's enough it's done
My trust for you is gone
I loved you more than myself
You're my precious thing than anything else
You left me crying on the street
And as we walk away with our feet,
I feel stupid while you're regretting
My heart is slowly dying
One day you are driving
And a car was coming
He might die!
But a part of me said "what a big lie"
Until your last breath I didn't go
I didn't feel such guilt
Then your mom talked to me
How much you want to say sorry
She gave me a videotape
And when I watched it I've a great remorse
You are trying to propose
All was just a BIG joke!
Your game tricked me
Then died saying it was your tale
Why did you lie, why asking never tried?
Don't answer it, it's too late
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Thanks guys!
