dimension discovery

chapter 1

A young girl named "Leona walks through the area. wow the sky looks really nice. i wonder is else is out there? the girl looks around the place. wow this is really cool. i guess i need to cross past the water. now i need to use the tress. wow this is really fun. it looks like there is a city of some kind. i think this is the place the others informed me about. it looks like someone is coming. why are you here? they begin to aim there weapons. hey i was just walking around and found this place. the men begin to look at the person. lets see your skills. the men attack her. she goes to kick them. you are strong.

"my people from my town informed good tales about a city out there. she begins to smile. it looks like i found you. you could be just what we need. our enemy is going to attack here any minute. the people begin to run away. it looks like they are back. ha ha. run little people. we have come to cause chaos on this land. so what is that thing?  a creature with a human like appearance smiles. come out humans. prepare yourselves. they begin to attack them. now men attack them. they begin to use some weapons to attack them. wow these guys are really good. i guess i should use this weapon to attack them. she begins to smile. this is going to be fun. she uses a weapon to attack them. how could a human be this strong? he looks in shock.

now take this! he goes to attack her. you really think that will work on me. she begins to dodge the attack. now it is my turn. she goes in for a attack. wow this girl is really good. i have been injured. he begins to laugh a little. what should we do? i think we should retreat. they begin to leave the city. we really did it. he begins to smile. let me introduce myself i am "Orin. he begins to smile. wow she is really cute. the young prince looks at her. tell me brave girl what is your name? well my name is Leona. it is really nice to meet you. she begins to smile. i am getting really hungry. i guess we could look for something to eat. here this should be a good spot. welcome what could i get for you? don,t worry i will pay for you. that is really nice of you. my friends and i always wanted to see what was out there. she begins to laugh a little.

so how did you find this place? Leona well the people in my town informed about this place. i think my parents and friends knew about this place. they say that there are some elite warriors here. that fought off some creatures. well you are looking one at them. he smiles. come on we should get out of here. so that is a castle? yes that is where the two princes live. why don,t we go inside. they begin to look around. greets you must be the warrior i have heard about. he begins to smile. these warriors have been helping us fight off those things. my younger brother is still getting the hang of fighting. i am getting better at it. a women in a cloak looks through a ball. it seems that this women has arrived in that place. she begins to smile. is her arriving a good thing or something bad? it is really hard to say. well sense you are here. i like to introduce you to our finest warriors.

this is Nathaniel,and Henry and finally yule. it is really nice to meet you. they begin to smile. and these are the battle partners. she looks and what looks like creatures. wow these things look really cool. she begins to smile. we should get you some cloths. those will not do. they are a little dirty. i guess you are right. and you smell a little to. the women take her to a tub. hey what are you doing. now we will make you clean. they use some brushes and soap to clean her. hey cut it out! she begins to move around the water. we are going to make you nice and clean. she begins to grin. here you should dry off with this towel. thank you. wow it feels really nice. i wonder if those things will be back to face us? i am sure that they will. you will need to be ready. don,t worry i will be. she gets up from the water. ha ha ha.

i still can,t believe we got beat by those guys. he punches the ground. i think we should report back. you are right. the others will not be happy about this. and our leader could be really made. he begins to catch his breath. come on lets go. they begin to head into a dark place. it looks like we are here. a creature goes past them. yikes that was really scary. three figures arrive in the dark. look at you guys. it seems that you were beaten. he begins to smile. hey those guys were really strong. so we had to get away. then i guess i need to clean up your mess. you guys look like a big mess. maybe i should have taken on those warriors. i would have really had some fun. here you should eat something. okay i guess we should eat something. you will need to earn it. first you need to fight them.

okay i guess we need to fight for the food. he begins to attack some of the small creatures. the creatures begin to attack him. he uses his claws to attack him. that was really good. he eats the food. next time i will crush them. this food is really good. whoever that person is. they are going to pay for making a fool out of me. Leona i guess i could try on these cloths. wow this is nice. i wonder what else is out there? yule i am sure you will see more. this town is really nice. i am sure you will have fun. Leona maybe i will be able to use a creature in battle? i am sure you will. i heard a tale of a girl who lived in a town. she is a skilled warrior who lived with nobles. she had skilled warriors to fight with. yule looks at her. i will tell you another time.

Garth looks around. this is good. i should go here. he walks around the town. two boys look at him. takashi what brings you here Garth? Garth i am just looking around. jugo we have not seen our sister in a while. garth are you talking about aquino? takashi yes we are. miyuki looks at them. i know we will find her. jugo i am glad you are here. takashi we should train. they use some weapons. miyuki this is good. Garth yeah this is nice. he smiles. i think that is enough. they eat some food. we should get some rest. jugo yeah we need to rest. maybe we could see if the hero brade can help us? garth i know we will see him again.

a women wearing a mask looks around. this is good. i wonder if those boys are looking for me? i should get going. she gets on the creature. two boys look around. we should be able to find our sisters. i know we will. a old man looks around. i should help these warriors. they will need my help. i am sure someone will use this braclet. a creature looks around. maybe i will fight with a strong person soon?

now the young girl has arrived in strange places that people spoke of. will we be able to fight off the evil forces? what did you think of this first chapter. i would to make things different by making a female the lead.