What I really hate is when people write stories on here and have no idea how to spell/use punctuation/spell. I mean, if the book is a crack fic it makes sense but if it's a serious fic sentences should NOT look like this (below).
ex: 2day i at mi cereul den brushd my teeth.
I just hate that so much. It makes the story less fun to read, since you have to spend time deciphering words. It's different if it's an author's note, but even then it should not look like this
hay guyz 2day iey went teo da nall nd it waz fun
^^ random sentence because I have no ideasI also really don't like it when there is no detail at all in writing, or if there is way too much. It just makes it incredibly boring (1) if there is no detail at all and (2) if there is too much so the story doesn't progress at all.
ex. 1 (not enough detail)
I wake up. I eat breakfast. I go to bed.ex. 2 (too much detail)
As I wake up on my sky blue comforter on my queen size bed in my green coloured room with 3 bookshelves and a small white dresser, I put on my $15 fluffy red velvety slippers from Target.