Week 7 Review Response: aftermat

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Thank you so much sa mga reviewers ko imakemyowndestiny frostysnowman113 ellesanity bentchbites yoshiro_hoshi HearmJan and MissBulilit
sobra po akong na-touch sa mga positive comments and reviews nyo, and syempre, thank you for pointing out the weaknesses and flaws ng story.

It would definitely improve hindi lang sa story kundi for me as a writer na rin. truth hurts right, pero kung sa ikabubuti at ikauunlad ko as a writer, then might take it as such.

At para naman dun sa mga natuwa dun sa mga characters ko, ito yun mini behind the names reveal. Mat ADAM and Summer EVE, andun na yun clue na magiging future couple sila. (ADAM and EVE)

dun sa family tree naman ni Summer Eve, puro weather at season and ginamit ko para madaling i-recall.

Dr. Ed WINTERFROST = father of Rain and Lily Winterfrost
John Eve married to RAIN Winterfrost= daughter SUMMER Eve
Seth AUTUMN married to Lily Winterfrost = daughter Willow Autumn

for the best reviewer, I'm torn kila ellesanity, bentchbitesfrostysnowman113yoshiro_hoshi and imakemyowndestiny

Sorry MissBulilit din na kita sinama sa pinagpilian kasi ever since naman, loyal supporter ka ng SoL, so sa iba naman natin ibabalik yun favor.

Thank you HearmJan for your honest feedback sa story, naka-note po lahat yun review nyo.

My Best Reviewer Choice is ellesanity

Thank you FWFC admins for this chance na mapansin ulit yun story ko at mabigyan ng decent feedbacks.

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