So before I start this review I want to say something.
It is creepy how much similarities there are between me and the author of the book I will be reviewing now. We have the same name (Lol heyy Esmee), we are from the same country, love the same music and are both very much into wrestling.
Now most of those things are irrelevant when it comes to a book review but seriously its like I just came across a different version of myself.
With that being said let's start with the review.
The cover
I really like the simplicity of the cover. Just a picture of Roman with basic colors and that's good. If covers have way too much going on when it comes to colors and people it gets a little messy. But with your cover this isn't the case so that good.
The title (When I do a book review I review everything!)
It's not a bad title, I mean at least it's not something like A Roman Reigns love story or My life in the WWE. I do feel like when it comes to Roman Reigns fanfictions that the word 'Reigns' is used a bit much but that way it's also a lot easier to figure out who the fanfiction is about so I can't say that I don't get it. Using a title so significant to Roman Reigns lets even people who aren't wrestling fans know who it is about.
The description
Thats one surprisingly detailed description and not to say its a bad thing but a lot of the info in your description didn't have to be there. I mean a lot of it could have been revealed during the story itself.
Personally I prefer shorter descriptions so I didn't really like this one since its so long.
The story
So first thing I noticed was that you actually are using Romans actual first name Leati instead of his middle name Joseph like most people that write Roman Reigns Fanfic's (including myself) do. Now most people know that i am a BIG fan of the Undertaker so I love it when he is used in stories. I also like that he is the sort of bad guy in the story.
The idea of a daughter of the undertaker is done quite a lot but honestly I don't mind that if the story is good. In this case I didn't mind it. I also like the fact that Michelle isn't portrayed as a evil stepmother in this book. I mean to me personally, Michelle is a big inspiration so I like it if she gets portrayed as a nice person.
Now I just have to mention this once, I love how she calls roman Mr.Cuddles! I mean that's one of the most adorable nicknames I've read in a fanfic so far. I am a hopeless romantic so I just love these things.
There also is A LOT of fluff going on in this book and again since I'm a hopeless romantic I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THAT. My favorite part of the book is probably the part where she meets Romans family and they go to the beach , I just think it was adorable.
There wasn't really much of an ending to this story since there is a sequel which I will write a book review about as well.
My final judgement
So I did like this book and it's definitely worth checking out. The grammar of the story isn't perfect but you can't really help that because English isn't your first language.
The story has loads of fun aspects and it has a really good plot. I am very excited to read and review the sequel!
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So here's your review xWritersxBlockx! I hope you are happy with my review. I hope the sequel is just as good or even better than this one.
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