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Scared At Nature

Story by:Emily_craycray

This review is written by aishafanfiction:) please do not take any score or review too much to the heart because everyone is unqiue and special in their own way. I was supposed to write this however there were issues.

Cover: 5.8/10

It was simple. Too simple for me. I like simple covers however this was way too basic. Also the title of on the cover could have had a much more darker depth or colour, but still be visible. For example the word 'scared' could have had shadows in between the plants. That shows fear more or less to me.

Title: 9.5/10

Who has judged a book by its title before? *raises hand* Me thats definitely. I made that mistake once or twice, i actually thought that this character would be frightened of plants or something and when i read it, it gave me a whole other perspective. Good job.

Story beginning: 5/10

I don't like stories that don't start with something exciting, more known as the climax of the story. It takes way too much time before you finally drag onto the topic or main reason why this book was created. Try enhancing it a bit by giving the first chapter a sneak peek of an exciting point of whats to come in future chapters. That would give the readers to want to read the book.

Punctuation mistakes/Grammar Mistakes/ Spelling errors: 6/10

The punctuation were either wrong or placed at the wrong parts of the paragraphs. There were spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes that needs to be resolved. Also when you write things when people are speaking to each other. Try doing this:

"Stop being such a pain!" She cried out, annoyed at him before raising her palm and aiming it towards his face.

Instead of:

"You did what?" She screamed.

Do you see the difference? Research shows that most readers appreciate it when authors go into details.

Story structure: 7/10

Some paragraphs were too short, thats my only concern. You need to grab their attention with moderate paragraphs and not too long or too short ones.

Plot: 9.5/10

Honestly, im not a huge fan of LBGT stories however, im not a biased writer/ author/ reviewer so i have to say what's fair. Its a good plot, but it needs development. It needs to grow within the story, try removing characters or adding some. Keep your readers on their toes.

Would i recommend this book?

Right now, i apologize but no. However, you have very good potential and i am looking foward to seeing more stories written by you.

Overall score: 6.9/10

Once again, i apologize for giving such a score and i feel bad writing this as we speak. Howeve, i swear to always tell my hoest opinions unless stated otherwise.

Xoxo

Keep on writing love!