Torment and Trust

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Review by- Cuddle_Puddle

For- Ultimate_Phantom

I hope you like the review! I tried my best..Here it goes-

Cover- 4/10

I am sorry for such low score but I dont really know how does your cover really match your story. There is neither any title or author's name on it. Cover is the main one of the main means to attract readers and I dont think they will choose a book without a appropriate cover. I read all the chapters of your book and damn they are so awesome! I will advice you to get a cover which matches your story as soon as possible because I myself want your story to get discovered by millions. You can put up the request on Book Cover Services where the graphic designers will surely help you out with it. Its up to you...

Description- 9/10

Description is a full on great. Not too big, nor too small, just perfect. It clearly demonstrated how your book is going to be and ignited the will to read it. The description played a nice role in connecting the others readers to your book.

Story Beginning- 9.5/10

Story beginning was a heart thief! I couldnt stop myself from reading the whole thing without even checking about any mistakes or errors. It just pinned me to your book and didnt let me go till I finished it! Nice work on the beginning!

Punctuation mistakes/ Grammatical mistakes/ Spelling errors- 9.7/10

Nah, I dont think there were any huge or major mistakes in the book. To actually see if there are any mistakes, I had to read it two times coz I would suddenly get carried away with the book and forget that I had a review to do! Little human mistakes are there but they are not big ones. The grammar police on wattpad will let you go through the gates!

Story Structure- 9.8/10

Paragraphs are cleanly divided and didnt exceed the limit of words a paragraph must contain. Nothing much to comment here as most of it was perfect..

Plot- 9.9/10

Haha! My favourite part of the review! Well the plot is...Great! Just great! I loved every single idea you have put in the book. The way it starts and is leading to is great. I didnt feel bored or lost during the whole ride. My all sympathy is for the girl while all hate is for Jane. Hmph! What a bad councellor she is?? Okay. I am again getting carried away and rambling things but really your book is awesome. I dont say it to everyone just as a sugarcoat, its the truth that I said.

Will I recommend it-

What do you think after reading the review?? Obvio I am going to hold my bestfriend and make her read it even if she likes only humor stories.!

Overall Score- 8/10

Please add on an awesome cover I gurantee you that none of the reviewers here on wattpad will go against the 10/10 score you will get after that.

Hope to see with again with another awesome request! Till then have a nice day!

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