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Found(A tangled fate novel)

Story by:ForeverChanged02

Hi! aishafanfiction here. Sorry that i didn't complete the rewiew sooner, i had a lot of things to do however, anyways lets get on it...

Cover: 8.5/10

I like the cover, it looks simple enough yet it drew my attention so thats a plus. What i could suggest is maybe add a magnifying glass or something to show the word 'found' in a picture. Our cover services would be happy to take on the job of making a cover for you(if you want) otherwise, great job.

Title: 7.5/10

I don't get the need to add [A Tangled Fate Novel] inside the title because you can easily just add it onto the summary/description of the story instead. So you would be left with 'Found.' Simple and it doesnt drag the reader to read the rest of the words. I do sometimes find it easier and quicker to just display something that is short and draws attention.

Story beginning: 9.5/10

Not bad. Maybe you could increase the intensity of the first paragraphs or change it to a very high point or an exciting point of the story. Somewhat like a sneak peek into the future but giving a cliffhanger before proceeding with the current timing.

Punctuation mistakes/Grammar Mistakes/ Spelling errors: 9.5/10

Not much however i suggest editing using a computer because it will immediatedly solve problems and errors for you. Such as spelling mistakes or sentences with wrong grammar.

Story structure: 10/10

Paragraphs are in an okay length so is the chapter length. I have nothing left to say here haha.

Plot: 9.7/10

Not bad however the plot was a little too predictable. Try keeping your readers on their toes and add new characters or remove some. They would have to pay attention.

Would i recommend this book?

Yes! Absolutely! Do remember to help out your fellow wattpaders and share, read and vote on their stories.

Overall score: 9.5/10

Lets see shall we round off? Agh maths, sorry im doing maths right now so...

Xoxo