Hey Pancakes! I know it's been a long time and I and sorry. So I hope you like this chapter on where Louis takes Ariana on the shopping trip. So ya enjoy!
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Louis' PROV
It was my turn to take Ari shopping. I am so excited because this will be the first time that we get to spend alone time with just each other. Maybe I can get closer to her and maybe even get her to feel something for me as well. That is my one true goal of our trip. I want to take her to my favorite store Forever 21. I knew she would love it because, well, I love it. When we entered the store I grasped her hand and pulled her to the other end of the store. When our hands touched sparks where going of, and I was hoping that Ari felt the too.
Ariana's PROV
Sparks. That's all I could think about when Louis touched me. Freakin' sparks. I wasn't suppose to feel this way about one of my brother's best friend let alone on the second day that I knew him. It's as though I'm hypnotized by this trance that I shouldn't be in. It was so wrong, yet it felt so right. No, I couldn't, I wouldn't, I shouldn't feel this. I could not do this with just meeting Niall. I just couldn't feel this right now though. With just getting to know my brother, this is going to have to wait awhile.
We reached a part of the store with dress and skirts. I felt so over whelmed I didn't know where to start. Of course Louis did and in a matter of seconds Louis' hands were filled and he was rushing me to another section. Just in fifteen minutes we had our hands full and he was rushing me to the dressing rooms. I had to try on everything and I loved it all. The last outfit that I tried on though, Was, I don't know how to explain it. I was just, outright amazing. It was black leggings with a white blouse. Louis also picked out a necklace and heals that were just amazing. To top it of there was a cream colored jacket with buttons going down the front. I felt so right in it. It was as though it was explaining my future and how I wanted it to be. It was just everything I could ask for.
"You look, uh, you look, just, amazing. I don't think anything has looked so gorgeous on any girl that I have ever seen!" Louis exclaimed. This of course made me blush. I looked down at the ground and smiled. "The way you smile at the ground it ain't hard to know, you don't know, oh, oh, you don't know your beautiful." Louis grabbed my chin and our eyes met. He leaned in, and I wanted to too, but I couldn't. I just can't couldn't with Niall being my brother. Let me tell you I wanted to kiss him so bad, but I couldn't.
"Um, we should probably pay for all of this and go and find the boys." I said pulling away and rushing to the dressing room, closing the door and sitting up against it, my face in my hands. I felt so stupid. I felt so bad. I felt so stupid and wanted to go and kiss him, but I resisted and just sat there.
Louis' PROV
She'd didn't kiss me. I felt so stupid. Why would she ever like me back. She just met me and she's Niall's sister. I just went and sat against her door. I thought I heard crying coming form inside, But I could be wrong, couldn't I?
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Sorry guys it took so long! I had a lot of stuff going on! Hope you like it! Comment, vote and everything. I will try to update as soon as I can. I don't have school tomorrow cause of semi and I will try to add more. Love you guys!
-Jessie :p
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