Dark Tales

Aladdevil - Aladdin's Story Part 1

Once upon a time there was a sorcerer named Jafar. He only has few powers to do what he desires, to rule the kingdom called Agraba. The only thing he do is to pretend as an adviser to the Sultan. He dreams for more power and authority until he heard about the legendary lamp that was hidden in the cave of treasures. But he can't go in, he is old and has a sinful heart, the gates will only be open for the only one who has a pure heart but will skills of a thief. Jafar is confused, how can he get someone who has a good heart but also a criminal? So he search with his magical scepter and ask who is the only one who can go in. His scepter shows an images of a boy, mostly known as a street rat but named Aladdin.

One day, after stealing a loaf of bread, he saw two kids who is obviously hungry, he parted the loaf and gave it them and the kids played with his friend Aboh, a monkey.
Aladdin was satisfied to see the two happy, then he heard some cheering from the crowd in the market. He check it and saw a well dressed man, a prince with his horse. On his way to the palace for the Princess Jasmine's hand. Aladdin have a thought, what if he was a prince, maybe he wouldn't have to steal and live like a rat and maybe have a chance to see the princess.

In the kingdom, the princess let her friend Rajah, a tiger to play with her suitor. The newly arrived prince was chased and scratched by the tiger, the prince complain to the Sultan and told him that he will never come back again then he left.

The Sultan talk to his daughter why he wouldn't let any of her suitor. She don't want to be married with a selfish prince who only has to talk all about his self.

At dawn, the princess ran away with herself and planned to have a walk outside the kingdom.

The princess reached the market and saw wonderful stuff that she never saw. While she walked through, she saw a child who is hungry and looking at those apples, she took an apple and gave it to her. "Here you go." She said and walk away.
"Hey! Pay for that!" The vendor of the apples said.
"Pay? I don't understand, I don't have any money." She said, all her life she never paid anything.
"Then you know the law!" The vendor said and was about to cut the princess' hand.
"Hey! Sorry sir but I don't think its right to cut off her hand just for a single apple." A boy said, it's Aladdin.
"But she's a thief!" He said.
"Well, you know. Most women in this market has mind problems, right? This one too has, I saw her every morning doing stuff only a retard will do." He said
The princess was so confused, then he saw the boy winked at her and knew what he's up to.
"Is that so?" The vendor asked.
"Look at her. She's talking to the monkey!" Aladdin said.
The vendor saw the girl talking to Aboh, the monkey.
Aladdin manage to escape from him with the princess and it was too late when he realized he has stolen more apples.

Aladdin went to his home with the girl, the princess cannot stop thanking him for saving her life. Until the guards found him. They chased them and until they have nowhere to go. The guards arrest Aladdin but the princess revealed herself and command them to let him go.
Everyone was surprised but the guards didn't let him go and told her that it was told by Jafar to arrest him.

The princess madly went home and told everything to the Sultan.

In the dungeon, Aladdin with Aboh is locked in there, with an old man.

The old man talked to Aladdin who can't stop thinking that the princess was with him earlier. The old man told him that if you wanted to be rich and powerful he can have it. Aladdin asked how. The old man pointed a secret passage way and they went outside. They went in a cave and Aladdin ask why. The man said that if he is only young like him he could've done it himself but he is weak and need him to do something exchange for the treasures. He told him to find an old lamp and give it to him and he can have all the treasures.

Aladdin step in the cave and the hidden gate was revealed and open to him. With Aboh, they saw mountains of gold and treasures. Aboh was so attracted to the treasure but the old man said not to touch anything but the lamp, so he told Aboh not to touch anything. While finding it, they saw a magic carpet flying around, it was alive. They ask where is the lamp, the carpet pointed it out and Aladdin quickly went there and told Aboh to stay. He climb up the stairs and reach for the lamp. When he got it, Aboh can't help it when he saw a large ruby at the top of a statue, the moment he touch it the whole place rumble like an earthquake. Aladdin and Aboh ran towards the gates riding on the carpet. Everything was falling apart and all the treasure was turning into sand. At the gate the old man was waiting and Aladdin saw it they were about to reach the gate but a big block of rock him the carpet and Aladdin jumped unto the cliff where the gate was, he is hanging there.
"Give me the lamp." The man said.
"Help me first!" Aladdin said.
"The lamp first and I'll reach you out!"
"I can't reach it!" Aladdin said.
"I want the lamp!" The man said
The gate was about to closed with some big piles of rock falling, so Aladdin let go off the cliff, luckily the carpet catches him.

They were all safe but they are trapped.

On the other side, the old man was so angry, he rip off his clothes, turned out that it was Jafar in disguise. He angrily walked away believing that Aladdin was dead.

In the cave..
"What do that man wanted from this lamp?" Aladdin asked himself. "It's so old and dusty"
Aladdin swipes away the dust and suddenly a huge red smoke came out of it and a man with a body that is red came out. His skin was all red, even his eyes is red, Aladdin was so frightened.

-End of Part One

Author's Note:
Sorry for the wrong spellings and grammar. I will correct it as soon as possible.

I just recently watch the Disney version of Aladdin to pick up some ideas because honestly I don't know how to end it, I have some few ideas and I hope you like it.

Thank you.