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I never done a yaoi fanfiction before so I'm a little hesitant on just how i should go about Mortum's personality. I was thinking bipolar ish, with him around Kuro be extremely girly like and loving(?), but still go with i hate the whole world vibe with other people. I highly like the idea of him being a badboy... so i guess im asking if i should start going badboy all the way and be completely dominate over Kuro.

I write for entertainment, so i want to please y'all. Do let me know what you guys think in either comments or DM me ^U^ thank you!

P.S: Sorry if I have lots of errors. I do try to look back and make sure i don't have any, but i miss them sometimes. Dyslexia doesn't help either :'(

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