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name - finding alisha
author - rosewoooz
genre - teen fiction

okay lemme start by saying i was reading your author notes and babe i'm only fourteen don't worry about it because i genuinely really liked the story, the idea is everything i love in a book and it's wrote in a really good way - 'she loved mysteries so much she became one' is someone a fan of paper towns??

anyway i would have happily read this even if i just stumbled across it and not been told to review it if you get what i mean, for a thirteen year old the grammar is really good and how the ideas are executed are also well done, the only thing i would want more of is description so like the setting and character development etc.
also clearer paragraphs as i did get a little confused but maybe that's just me haha

all in all a solid 7 out of 10, well done!

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