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name - superhero best friends
author - CrystalRose00
parts - 8
genre - teen fiction

i had actually read this book before you asked me to review it and then read it again to refresh which i find a bonus, and let me say i enjoyed it both times! the ideas put in are really good and i say this a lot, but the premise is really good, there are so many great ideas whirling around wattpad lately!

the one thing that i've said to most other people is that i would like more character development but we get that in the first chapter which is really good because it paints a picture throughout the whole book, there was also descriptions of the characters personality which also gives the author a good base so well done,

i think the ideas that are portrayed are really good, the characters emotional deprivation like the mother dying and the unrequited crushes are good plot points.

the only thing i would say is there is a big information splurge which may turn people away and not give your ideas justice - for example the crush the main character has on her bestfriend, instead of just directly telling us maybe ween it into the characters actions or what they say so the reader can figure it out themselves, all in all a good eight out of ten!