A lot of you guys love this story I know but I'm not sure about what do do with it the plot is all raunchy and I'm thinking it's a good idea but it needs something else I know you guys are going to spill some uproar and I'm counting on it any ideas to help with this fic would be amazing to be perfectly honest the idea is amazing and I love it but I feel like Marco would never become so upset without a further reason I was planning on it to be The fact that Marco was in love with star but I don't know if that's enough I feel like Marco loves star but not that that much so I want to have another reason it can't exactly be proposal with out a sex scene guys so if your not into that kind of stuff don't ask for it. I just know I'll get some great ideas and if you want me to continue then spill them maybe one of you can be my co-author ;)
~Stella Bleu
