Its Halloween night and we need somethin spoopy an oc that causes fear so bad it's made fun of by the fandom. Tonight fan fic is My immortal.Its Harry Potter I haven't read any of the books but I have read most of the stuff on pottermore and seen most of the movies. Now let us read the dreaded my immortal.
A story originally on fanfiction.net people really don't know if its a troll or not its so bad.
It opens with a girl saying her name which is so long its Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way pretty long, and emo.And she is disobeying the rule where the wear robes she wears a short skirt instead of robes you can tell this is a great start. And shes a vampire how emo and gets all her clothes from hot topic , again with the clothes.Shes happy there is no sun and sees Draco.She sleeps in a coffin instead of a bed. I don't know how she got into hogwarts with this crap but she drinks blood from where I don't know And this is so bad
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